To Lie by eseech

Title (3/5)

The title didn't really spark any interest in me, but it kind of relates to the story. I'm sure there could've been a better title for this fanfic, though.

Appearance (--/5)

You didn't have a poster or a background, so I didn't count this part in your grade.

Description/Foreword (8/15)

Your description was fine, but it contained a couple of errors. Your foreword was okay, too, but I wished that you would add something more to the foreword instead of the author's notes.

Plot (23/25)

I could've said that it was a typical gang story, but you really added your own originality into it! I like how there's a brother-to-brother tragic relationship here than a romance tragic relationship. It really had a deep and caring meaning. I could tell how much Junghyung cared for Yoseob. However, some parts confused me. For an example, at the final chapter, I didn't understand if AJ AND Kikwang wanted Junghyung dead. In addition, I didn't know if it was Yoseob who was being killed because of his high-pitched scream, or if Junghyung was being killed. I had to read it a couple of times to understand the situation.

Characters (10/15)

To be honest, the only "unique" character is probably Yoseob. The other characters are pretty cliché. For an example, let me take Junghyung and AJ. Junghyung is the typical gang member who's always struggling to live, and AJ is someone who seeks revenge because the main character killed his lover.