A Day Without You by ninetyseven

Title (3/5)

To be honest, I don't find the title entertaining. It sounds a bit plain, and I'm sure that I could look up this title and find some fanfics with the same tittle. Yet, the title matches with the story's plot, so I added a point for that.

Appearance (--/5)

You didn't have a poster or anything, so I won't count this in the review.

Description/Foreword (12/15)

I love the description. That one little quote told me what kind of the story I was going to be reading. The foreword, however, had some grammatical error. I didn't know if you were keeping the story in past tense or in present tense. In addition, the author's note didn't need to be added to the story. It's (the author's note) information that the readers don't really need for the story.

Plot (23/25)

I thought the plot was cute. It was simple, and yet, refreshing. I like your writing style, but then you did have some grammatical errors.

Characters (10/15)

I, sadly, have seen characters like this in one-shots.  There's this guy who's in love with a girl, but the girl can't tell if she loves him or not. Soon, after series of events pass by, the girl realizes her feelings and accepts the boy's confession or proposal or etc. In my opinion, characters like these are quite common to find in one-shots.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (13/20)

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