{review} Calling Kim_Hanyu
★ Silly Dreams Request Shop ◕ ◡ ◕Latte Heartstrings by Kim_Hanyu
Title (2.5/5)
It is an unique title, but not very eye-catching.
Appearance (5/5)
Poster and background are just cute! It also matches the mood of the story. Perfect!
Description/Foreword (7/15)
It’s nice that you have a little quote in the description, but it might bore the reader. Maybe, a little summary or some quotes that would make the reader want to read your story. In the foreword, it would be great to have a description for all the major characters who will be appearing in your story so readers can see how they look like, their personalities, etc.
Plot (11/25)
Your story is not cliché, but it gives the reader the feeling that you just know what will happen in the end. But, I can see the originality in your story, so I’ll give you some points for that.
Characters (0/15)
The characters are cliché and dull. Try giving one of them some rudeness or one of them a dirty-minded head. Give them some “spice!”
Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (10/20)
Incorrect: We never really thought we’d meet at all I guess. I was working as a singer for a café with my band. He was a usual customer there. We attended the same school but
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