{review} Calling minniethepooh
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His Heart is Mine! by minniethepooh
Title (2/5)
The title is cliche and it sounds a bit bratty.
Appearance (2/5)
It’s good that you have a poster, but the poster doesn’t really show the story, just a picture of the main character. It would be better to include a picture Hyunseung, Hyuna, and maybe B2ST. Plus, the poster & background gives off a angst mood.
Description/Foreword (9/15)
The description is a good, short summary of the overview of the story, but the part at the end that says, “HIS HEART IS YOURS” is a bit awkward. I like that in the foreword, you showed some traits and the personalities of the characters.
Plot (10/25)
Again, the plot is cliche and I have seen this kind of plot where the girls chase after the guys and they both eventually fall in love. But I like it how the story is set at Cube Ent., somewhere unique and special, instead of at an ordinary school or at home.
Characters (12/15)
The characters are a little more unique which I like. Hyunseung is a cold-hearted, mean, rude guy (cliche) while the OC seems again, bratty, spoiled and determi
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