The Chaser by nomnomnomz & tetejjang

Title (1/5)

A word of advice: Never use a title from a song. When you use a song title (example: The Chaser by Infinite), the title tends to be used in many fanfics, either based on the song or not based on the song. I can see how it relates to the foreword, but I don't see how it's relating to the story's plot. Then again, you only have two chapters, so I can't blame you.

Appearance (3/5)

The poster has the characters, cars, the title, the author – overall, I like it. I just don't understand why there's the target symbol. Will there be violence involved (such as guns shooting)?

Description/Foreword (9/15)

I like the description, excluding the character information. It gives your reader a good summary of the story. However, it's best if you delete the character information because you're telling the readers your character's characteristics instead of showing them.

Your foreword only has short teasers from the story. In my opinion, a foreword should have a prologue or some kind of quote that will further on tell your readers about the story.

Plot (23/25)

So far, I like where this story is going! It's funny and cute, but it goes against the mood of the poster and the mood your created in your descripti