Heaven by InspiritBaby

Title (0/5)

The title is way to cliché. I can go all around AFF, and I will find a title with "Heaven" very easily. I think you could've came up with a better and non-cliché title.

Appearance (5/5)

Your poster is fine. It gives off a sad mood, just like the feeling your story is starting to (and going to) give off.

Description/Foreword (6/15)

I thought your description was fine, but it wasn't really a prologue. Let me note that a prologue is an event that connects (or leads to) another event. I'm usually okay with character charts, but it's best to express your characters by showing rather than telling.

You got a lot of points docked off because of your foreword. Your foreword didn't really tell me much of the story. If the author's notes doesn't inform your readers about something important (like clarification), then you shouldn't add it. 

Plot (15/25)

It's a typical sad story between two people who have some sort of illness. There wasn't a moment when I read through this fanfic that made me think that you added originality in it.

Characters (8/15)

Again, with the typical sad story, the characters are also cliché. I can find a lot of fanfics who had a similar personality to IU: a happy, go-lucky girl on the outside, but in the inside she doesn't believe in miracles. I can also find a character like Myungsoo: a cold-hearted boy but will later warm up to the main girl character.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (13/20)

You had almost no spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. The only problem you had was using past-tense an