Terrible Things by chartreuse

Title (3/5)

Not really eye-catching, and it's pretty cliché. I understand how the title relates to the story, but it feels like a weak title compared to the deep emotion the story gives off.

Appearance (3/5)

In my opinion, the poster looked just a bit awkward. The quote was a bit to big, but that all depends on you. I docked off two points, though, because of your background. There were these weird symbols on your background, which kind of bothered me.

Description/Foreword (13/15)

I love your description. It's simple, and it doesn't reveal too much of the story.

I also love your foreword. It gives off a good amount of information about the story and what the readers are in for. I docked off two points only because of the author's notes.

Plot (24/25)

I've seen one-shots where a love-one dies, but this…this was beautiful. I almost cried when I read this one-shot. I'm speechless for words.

Characters (14/15)

Again, I've seen characters that passed away after being pregnant with a child or something, but I love the other characters in this story. They all pitch in to make a wonderful story.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (18/20)

I must say, you hardly had any errors at all. The only errors I found were very minor, and those minor errors were hardly noticeable.