Just Another Distant Memory by twinklelittlestar

Title (3/5)

The title is nice and creative, it also fits in the angst theme. It is a little cliche, but still creative.

Appearance (3/5)

The picture of Kikwang is just a little awkward and doesn’t really fit in the story. But, it is good that you at least showed a picture of Kikwang to show the readers a picture of what he looks like.

Description/Foreword (9/15)

The description is a little too detailed and a bit wordy. If you could condense it, it would give off more suspicion and readers would want to know what would happen. Plus, in the foreword, it would be better if you could add some traits about the characters so the readers can envision them in their minds.

Plot (13/25)

The plot is nice, but some scenes in the storyline is a little random and useless. And, most of the one-shot isn’t really angst-y, but happy. But, I did like that instead of a happy ending, there was a tragedy where Kikwang dies and that Eunji is starting to forget him. The only problem is, that there are still some loose threads hanging and you didn’t really tie it all up.