I'm Yours by MissTangerine

Title (0/5)

The title is plain and is too cliche. 

Appearance (4/5)

It’s good that you have a poster to show the mood of the story and the characters, but it would be better to have a background.

Description/Foreword (9/15)

The description is nice, but there are two problems. At the end, the sentence says: Who will be the lucky guy to hear her say “I’m yours.”? The correct punctuation is: Who will be the lucky guy to hear her say “I’m yours”? The second problem is that the “Additional Characters,” the poll, and advertising your other fics is a little awkward in the description, so it would be better to put it at the foreword.

The foreword is nice, giving a little synopsis of the story. But, it would be better to tell the personalities and features of the characters that will be appearing in your story.

Plot (12/25)

The plot is great and it interests the readers. But, this plot is cliche – love triangles, trying to win over the heart of one girl, etc. So, if you add some of your own ideas, then that would enhance the plot and captivate the readers more.

Characters (15/15)

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