My Heart Says You by yoongseororo

Title (3/5)

I like the title, it sounds nice and sweet. But, it sounds a little too plain, it won’t really catch other people’s eyes.

Appearance (2.5/5)

The poster is pretty! It shows the overall mood of the story and snippets of the story in the poster. Just one thing though, is the background. I do not know why your background is of Vienna Opera, which is a bit awkward and confusing and can throw people off.

Description/Foreword (8/15)

The description is nice, but a bit messy. The love quotes, Yoona’s and Donghae’s quotes just seem thrown all over the description and it is a bit confusing. It is good that you have the cast, but it would be better to put it in your foreword.

The foreword is well done, giving a small part of the plot/story. As said above, it is better to place the character cast at the foreword.

Plot (12.5/25)

Your plot is cliche, but I can tell that you tried to put in some of your own originality into the story which makes the story at least more unique.