Broken

Love Star (Broken Wings)
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The wind blew hard and a piece of paper traveled with it. No matter what direction the wind takes, the paper also did. It was lost, just like it's owner. But it isn't just a piece of paper trampled, torn and was left on the road. It has something more to it. Probably something more than the paper had witness while it flew with the wind. Because somehow, the paper tells a story from someone who could not fly anymore like the paper did.

 

Somehow, the paper flew for its owner.


 

 

Again, the wind blew, but the paper didn't change its place. It moved but it remains in place - not on the ground, but between the spaces of the slender delicate fingers of a lady owning these gorgeous orbs which are slowly running through every letter scribbled on it. A tear unconciously escaped from the corner of the orb's chamber.



It falls down as she reads each word inscribed on it.
 



Because on the paper, she found a fading ink... and it mirrored what she couldn't say.


 

 

 

 

 



When you left me, I found myself devastated. Shattered. A wreckage.


Just like your promise that you wouldn't go aw

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CzarSinB
For my readers, I've been receiving questions and some requests, so for now I'll answer some in the comment section.

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Andrea_97 #1
Chapter 33: Noo!!, I just discover your stories and love all of them but this one is gold!!, hope you can update soon, don't abandon this fic please!!
SinRin03
#2
Chapter 33: please update authornim this story is so great! I hope you update soon
_NightDrive #3
Chapter 33: Hope you will update soon ? more wonha please XD
CzarSinB
#4
Sorry, wasnt able to update again. I'm getting ready 'coz the school is coming. :/ I have to study everything that I learned to handle my patients well. :") I'll try to write for an update as soon as I have a long available time. I wanted to post an update that is not crammed so it would all be worth a read. Again, thank you for staying and sorry for the wait.
Crossworld #5
Waiting for the updates ??
ohtaenykim
#6
Chapter 33: Ohhhhh waiting for the update??
GabaOMG02
#7
Chapter 33: And the hurricane begins </3
Gn_Re90
#8
Chapter 33: i like cubes.. hehe esp. when the edges are chamfered and fillet. (•‾⌣‾•) when everything looks smooth and shiny.. hehe (what am i talking about?)

now, it felt like the stars are dazzling in the story... way more shiny on this chapter along with the moon casting the light on those two lovebirds that doesnt even want to go home (if they were allowed too).. the stars are brighter tho it's surely raining today.. hahaha (am i making you confused?hehe)

sometimes, i really want to go inside the story and push these two girls that was softly flirting to each other and tell them..'SAY I LOVE YOU ALREADY!'...haha but no, haha lets take it slow.. and me, i'll just patiently wait.. like i always do ~~~?❤️

i'm having a great morning because of this..
thank you czar, as always... (๑´ㅂ`๑)❤️
Qazxsw12 #9
Thankyou for the update authornim! Just pretend i read it already :"D
So1derful
#10
Chapter 33: Hm, meds.
Oh boy....