REVIEW PICKUP: sociallyawkwardandwe

Title: 4/5 Haunted only covers up part of the story. Maybe there’s something better?

Description: 5/5 It was everything a description needed.

Vocabulary: 9/10

Grammar: 9/10 There were a few mistakes here and there. They’re probably typos.

Ch.2 (after the second ~***~): “It was Sunday night and Youngjae was sat on the dinner table with books and notes sprawled in front of him.”

C: “It was Sunday night and Youngjae was sitting at the dinner table with books and notes sprawled in front of him.”

Plot: 9/10 It was an interesting plot. In most of the stories that I’ve read, the ghost would die while the other one would keep on living, finding someone else but here, the ghost dies and then the other one dies as well to reunite.

Effect on reader: 9/10 There were times when I felt the same emotion as the reader. That is something I really love with reading. I can feel what the characters are feeling.

Flow: 8/10 In my opinion, changing your personality from a jerk to a nice one would be hard in 3 months. It would’ve taken at least one year. Also, Youngjae’s and Daehyun’s feelings for each other were so sudden. I like how you had their feelings grow but it was just so unlikely.

Overall: 88/100 I upvoted this story since I loved it. I don’t usually read but I read this and I did not regret it. J

**Also, I’m sorry that this was finished late. I had a really bad headache the last few days >< Hope this was helpful!

REVIEWER: Jindos21

REVIEW FINISHED ON: 07/26/2014

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