Title: 5/5 The Reason I Became A Witch. NS Yoon G am I right?

Description: 5/5 How cold blooded can you be? Demolishing the entire human population to your own liking? That's sick. Yet, you made pure evil so enjoyable and fun to read with your intriguing description. Nice work!

Vocabulary: 9/10 A variety of words used to describe everything describable.

Plot: 10/10 I enjoyed the arrangement of your plot, how you showcased that Sungjong was a  pure monster at the start of your story and how he developed such a horrid personality to extent of tearing apart everything in his way. Elaboration in the build up was fairly necessary as it gives the reader a clear picture and maybe even arouse sentiments of the reader towards the persona.

Grammar: 9/10 Some minor, negligible mistakes.

Flow: 10/10 The story was rather lively and the flow was inevitably smooth with the plot in good order.

Effect on reader: 9/10 I pity how much Sungjong went through to turn into someone like this, really. Yet, killing his own son is going way overboard. I am wowed!

Overall: 91/100 At least this wasn't another corny story about EXO again. Your story embodied all the elements that makes a story intriguing and least to say readable. You got your characters all correct and made thorough descriptions which conspicuously bring out the personalities of the personas, from the witch Sungjong, to the cold-hearted Myungsoo, and the pitiful Sungyeol. The plot and settings were all arranged perfectly. 

(Still, I don't get if Sungjong is a male or female in the story... I mean with respect to the real Sungjong, who is a boy, he/she got pregnant, stripped, kissed by a boy... All these seem to be the traits of a girl, yet I couldn't help but notice that there were a few pronouns 'he' in the story pointing to Sungjong... I wonder...)