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The Review: 

1. Punctuation, Spelling and Grammar (19/20)
- I won't make this long because there's really no major mistakes, just some tenses that are switched when there was no need to. Other than that, everything's perfect!

2. Title (5/5)

- The title has a certain feel to the story, it's very unique. I thought that it would be a story that would include people with supernatural powers and so on, but you, my great friend, have proved me wrong. I salute you for bringing something new to my eyes. Good job!

3. Organization (10/10)

- This section is probably going to be the shortest because I don't have anything to say as you made me speechless with your flawless job.

4. Details (10/10)

- Incredibly amazing. The details were spot-on; I couldn't find a sentence nor paragraph that didn't have details that enhanced your story. You made me feel warmth when it needed to and I just felt empty onc