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The Review: 

1. Punctuation, Spelling and Grammar (19.8/20)
- I didn't really see any mistakes in this section, but I don't really like it when authors use open and closed parentheses in their story, and so I had to deduct a 0.2 in your score.

2. Title (4.5/5)

- The title plays a massive part in your story. But the title is not eye-catching, and if I were a random reader and wanted to read a fluff story about TaoRis, I'd just pass this story and continue browsing.

3. Organization (9/10)

- The way you organize the shift scenes from one to another is quite impressive. The story was lacking in though, but other than that; everything's pretty good.

4. Details (9/10)

- The details in your story are very precise. I like how you vary your word choice in the story. From my little knowledge in French, the first chapter would be entitled 'with the exception for/of' (I'm sorry if I got that wrong) and I like how Tao doesn't mind if Kris touches him even if it can send germs to him; it's quite a creative title actually. But I would've liked a quick summa