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The Review: 

1. Punctuation, Spelling and Grammar (20/20)
- I am amazed as I have found no grammar or punctuation mistakes in your story. Great job!

2. Title (5/5)

- When I first saw your title, I thought that it would be a cliché story (person cheats on lover), but I was wrong. The title plays a huge part in the story as not only does it summarize the whole plot but it also gives insights to what the reader may expect during their adventure through your story.

3. Organization (9.5/10)

- Order of events were perfect! Although, I would like it if you made it more lengthy to provide more details.

4. Details (9/10)

- How did Daehyun feel as he gave Youngjae away? Clearly, Daehyun would still have sympathy for Youngjae as he still spent most of his years with him, and only him. I want to see how Daehyun reacted when his wife told him that she wasn't a "dog person".

5. Creativity and Response (10/10)

- Your creativity is at the top of the world. I have never seen such a story and it surprised me a lot. Response is great, your readers seem to have emotional breakdowns in the comments.

6. Graphics (4.5/5)

- I deducted a half point as the title is quite small. I would like to have it bigger. And for Youngjae, he just seems out of place that when I first saw