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The Review: 

1. Punctuation and Grammar (17/20)
- Again, the biggest flaw is the switching tenses between times. You also have the tendency to mix up nouns that are supposed to be in singular form with a plural form, and vice-versa. The mistakes are just minor and could be fixed within a small amount of time with editing.

2. Title (4/5)

- I had to minus one because the title is so widely used that if I were to search it up, it would have a whole bunch of different results before I see yours. Although it is quite used, your title has a different feel to it. At first I thought that Hyuna was trapped with guilt but then by the end, but by the end you've managed to shock me by the sudden twists of events.

3. Organization (10/10)

- You had a mysterious beginning, a , and a resolution by the end. Well done!

4. Details (7/10)

- As much as I do not want to deduct any points in this section— there are some things that you have missed that made the storyline a little bit confusing. For example, you have written that there were six survivors out of the fifty but by the end you only