How it began.

Fostered love.

“Aish” yelled Baro as he splashed his face with cold water. He looked up into the mirror of the empty men’s washroom. “Why did they have to come” Baro sighed as he leaned against the marble counter top. The washroom was spotless in comparison to Baro’s now, wet suit. The splashes of water gave his black tux a dirty, crumpled look. Baro looked at them and sighed he walked over to the hand dryers and began to dry his tux. Suddenly he heard a loud bang followed by screams. They in turn were followed by an alarm sound.

“What the hell”. Baro left the bathroom and ran to the room where his family where. However his face turned pale as he came face to face with the most terrifying sight that he had ever seen.  The whole corridor leading to the room was filled with flames and smoke. There was no way by as the flames soared to the ceiling engulfing everything in its way. Baro quickly searched through his pants for his phone. With no look he searched his suit eventually finding it in his pocket. By this stage smoke had begun to reach him. Within seconds all of the oxygen was replaced with smoke. Baro began to move away from the fire as he coughed. He dialled 119 and waited for an answer.

“Hello, emergency services how may I help you?” asked the woman.

“I need the fire brigade and ambulances.” Said Baro trying to remain calm.

“What is your address?” asked the woman.

“EH… eh… eh its... Eh Dongdae Gil convention hall. Please hurry my family are trapped in a room and there’s no way that I can get to them” suddenly Baro began to cough heavily as the smoke engulfed him. “Please...… hurry” panted Baro through coughs. Suddenly Baro felt dizzy. He struggled to get free of the smoke. He could make out the exit up ahead through the smoke. Suddenly he felt something tug him.

 

“Ah” yelled Baro as he woke up. He lay staring up at his carer, who looked back at him concerned. Baro was pale and was covered in a cold sweat.

“Are you alright?” asked the woman.

“Hm...”  Replied Baro as he sat up.

“Okay. Hurry the Jung’s will be here soon.” Said the woman.

“Oh. Thanks noona” replied Baro as he got out of bed.

 

Baro sat beside the woman from earlier as a couple walked in guided by the man in charge of the foster home. They sat at a large table in a well-lit office. Baro still looked slightly pale as he sat still in his usual jeans and t-shirt. The husband and wife sat down opposite him and smiled.

“Baro, Im sure you remember Mr and Mrs Jung from before.” Said the man.

“Ah, anyeosaeyo” said Baro bowing slightly to them.

“He is so well behaved” said the head man.

The couple nodded as they continued to smile.

“No Baro, Mr and Mrs Jung have decided to adopt you” announced the head man.

Baro looked up in shock. He looked from the head man to his carer to the Jungs and back to the head man. “M…m...Me” said Baro completely shocked.

“Yes” said the head man smiling at Baro.

“Of course if that’s okay with you Baro” said Mrs Jung. “We don’t want to force you into anything that you don’t want”

“Thank you” said Baro bowing again.

The Jung’s smiled back at him as the head man passed a form in front of him.

“Sign here, here and here” said the head man as he pointed to empty lines on the form.

“Sure” said Mr Jung taking a pen and signing his name before passing the form and pen to his wife. Once they finished signing their names they handed it back to the head man excitedly.

“now, let us leave for a minute and let Baro’s carer decide if this is right for Baro.” Announced the head man.

“Of course” said Mr Jung as he and his wife followed the head man out.

“I think you should go with them” said the carer after the other adults left.

Baro nodded. “If noona thinks it’s right then I’ll go with them.” Replied Baro.

The woman smiled at him as she took his hands and looked into his eyes. “Are you sure you’re ready?”

“Now or never” said Baro smiling slightly. The carer smiled and hugged him tight. “I’m gonna miss you noona”

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teddybearry
#1
Chapter 28: hooray! worth the wait. xD it's a really nicr story. ;)

author-nim. was that a typo when you mentioned baro's name a little too early? somewhere in the begining. anyway. it's daebak! another badeul story author-nim?? ^^
GJAYD1S #2
Chapter 28: I really really liked the way you wrote this chapter. The words were really pretty and I think it's the best writing I've read from you. It did feel little out of place, the scene I mean. Because at first the atmosphere is little sad but beautiful and then suddenly it changes into a scene? XDD haha, it's okay. It just made me rise my eyebrows like "umm what?"
What you said about "writing what readers want" is partly true. When writing fanfics you do have to think about your readers a little. Because there's fans who likes to read about their otp's and fans who wants to read about their biases with someone else. I think that's why a writer needs to decide in the beginning which one it's gonna be, because if you write Badeul fic the fans are coming to read Badeul. They don't want to see too much other pairings since the reason why they came was Badeul. Do I make sense? XD Ofc there's people who are okay with other pairings, but this is how I see it.
As a writer myself I know how the plans for a story can change XDD
In the end I think you did a great job. When you write again, I'll come read it.
BaDeulcutie #3
Chapter 28: Ooh thank god it end happy ending.. make another badeul please.. hehehe
lovetoreadlol #4
Chapter 28: Awww, this story is over. :'/
I'm kinda sad that it is but i'm glad things turned out happily. Like seriously, Baro and Sandeul ended as Badeul. And like Daehyun ended up with someone else even though it kinda surprised me who it was. I feel dumb now for not even seeing that
GOOD WORK ON THIS STORY AUTHOR-NIM! :D
MomoElF_jn #5
Chapter 28: Oh thank god our Baro baby isn't dead!!! I'm so happy you didn't do that to us author-nim!! ^^ great job! I was a little confused at first and was all like "da faq" when reading it, but it all turned out good, I figured it out!!
Can't say I really liked the talking dirty to each other part. Because Sandeul I couldn't imagine him being like that...but it was still a good fic all in all!!
StarrySky111 #6
Chapter 27: Oh my... Baro!!
U aren't dead yet... I know u will never leave Sandeul behind and after all you have gone through... U must fight...

Author nim... U rlly LOVE to put your characters into the hospital...
BTW... Pls update soon^^
GJAYD1S #7
Chapter 27: I see you really like to put your characters to the hospital all the time
soojinnie-3- #8
Chapter 27: BARO!!! WHY R U ALWAYS GETING HURT?!
AND NOW U DIE?
NUH UH NOPE NOT POSSIBLE
lovetoreadlol #9
Chapter 27: WHA? WHA? WHATTTTT? Baro you have gone through sooooo freaking much. DON'T YOU DIE NOW! D:<
I really really REALLY can't wait for the next update! :)
MomoElF_jn #10
Chapter 27: AHHHHH OH MY ING GOD!!! HOW COULD YOU AUTHOR-NIM??? HOW COULD YOU??!!! >:(
Nonononononoonknononnonnonononon our Baro is not dead. He can't be. I won't agree with it. You're just joking, he can't be. They didn't even confess, they didn't even kiss with true feelings!!! I JUST WANT TO YELL AND CURSE AT YOU AUTHOR-NIM!!! But I'm nice, so I won't. How could you do this to us...? He was so young...:(