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I saw this picture and immediately thought of this story, a photo of Chanyeol and his daughter Lina! He looks like a parent doesn't he? It's so cute!!

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Cup_baek #1 Sep 21, 2018 15:56:51

Chapter 20: Ok now we know the truth but still I can't digest that chanyeol cheated even if he was drunk I cannot digest it:(

JessYoung_H #2 Nov 8, 2017 16:57:23

Chapter 30: I'm sorry but I think this is the first story that really makes me kind of aggressive. Tbh I didn't liked the characters (Baek being to weak and unreasonable plus for me too stupid by forgiving Yeol so fast while Chanyeol had been just an . He could have talked it ing out. No. He was the biggest jerk ever and coward, hurting Baek the most and then saying 5 times sorry and everything's good? And Yuri? That woman knows Yeol is in a relationship and did never implied Yeol to try talking to his freaking boyfriend. I find her unsympathetic as well) Another thing is that Baek seems like a typical Mary-Sue. Everyone is after him and he's such a perfect person so everybody needs to love him. Sorry, but no. Some parts of this story where just gross in my opinion, especially the beginning with how pathetically Baek tried to catch after Yeol and didn't wanted to let go. Even I found it cringy and clingy.
I dunno... The idea of your story in general is great! It really is, but I personally dislike a lot how you managed it. I just find Chanyeol and Yuri unsympathetic as and Baek annoying. I really wanted to give up on reading cuz some chapters made me so aggressive because of their outcome. I just hate not finishing a story. So yeah. It's my opinion I know I sound very harsh, but I wanted to be honest with you. Even tho you won't read this nor will I have an answer.

heungsoonshipper #3 Mar 16, 2017 22:27:42

Chapter 30: AW THIS FIC SERIOUSLY. My feelings <3 AWww what a nice ride. I loved this story <3

heungsoonshipper #4 Mar 16, 2017 21:47:59

Chapter 20: THAT CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD OMG

*cries*

heungsoonshipper #5 Mar 16, 2017 21:31:46

Chapter 16: :O

heungsoonshipper #6 Mar 16, 2017 21:26:14

Chapter 15: THIS. CHAPTER. OMFG OMFG OMFG OFMEMZGOAJHFZuo hefz zoiehfa'uoezfh I'M-

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too much to process

:') SO MUCH DRAMA srly

heungsoonshipper #7 Mar 16, 2017 21:20:24

Chapter 15: OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG *SCREAMS*

heungsoonshipper #8 Mar 16, 2017 21:13:20

Chapter 14: OMG. This fic........................... :'(

heungsoonshipper #9 Mar 16, 2017 21:00:41

Chapter 11: I WANT TO KNOW OMG... Is Chanyeol sick ? Who's "baby"? aaahuifegzfmbjkcd. I love fics with so many secrets..... :') 8) :D

naty_kkaebsong #10 Dec 22, 2016 23:14:17

Chapter 30: Oh God this was amazing. I can't tell you enough how much I love this and how much I loved reading this. I'd say it's perfect in any way. Although it was somehow painfully frustrating watching the path of their relationship, I really enjoyed reading this. Oh man, when Chanyeol broke up with him, I was this close to crying, you described it perfectly. But I'm so glad how everything worked out and the way they truly loved eacother was just priceless. Thank you for this wonderful story ♥♡♥シ