Haneul

Cheonsa
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     As all of Infinite rushed into the room, they waited for their leader's word on what they should do. Slowly, Sungkyu made his way over to the bedside as the girl looked up at him, blinking innocently. I'm the leader of Infinite. Why should I be afraid of her? She seems harmless enough… he thought, finally mustering up the will to come near her.

     She winced as she shifted her weight slightly to face him. "My wing…"

     "Is it broken?" he asked uncertainly. The fact that she could speak at least made her seem less like a creature, and more like a person.

     She glanced over her shoulder, "I don't know… But it hurts a lot." She thought back to as recent as she could remember, before she woke up in that alleyway, but it was all blank to her memory. How did I get here?

     "Who are you?" he asked, somewhat mesmerized by her smooth, unflawed voice.

      She glanced out the window, and the first thing she saw was the impeccably blue sky, with its white fluffy clouds now obscuring the heavens above. "Haneul," she answered.

     "…What are you?"

     She turned back to face them, but then winced in pain when her wing shifted its position, her fists balling up as she gripped the bed sheets tightly.

     "Alright, go get me some materials to make a splint out of. I have to try something to help," Sungkyu said, kneeling on the floor beside Haneul. Woohyun and Sungjong left the room in search of medical supplies. After they returned, Sungkyu attempted to construct a makeshift splint around the injured wing so that it would no longer move out of place.

     "It should be okay," he announced once he finished.

     Uncertainly, Haneul slowly sat up from the bed, supporting herself with both arms. "Thank you, human."

     Sungkyu rubbed the back of his neck, feeling strange to be addressed that way. "The name's Sungkyu," he said, holding out his hand for her to shake. Haneul smiled, but then grabbed his wrist, turning it to press the palms of their hands flat against each other. Sungkyu stiffened as he felt a strange sensation, unlike any he had felt before. It was as if he could truly feel the amount of gratitude that she had for him as a rush of energy pulsed through him.

     When she didn't let go, he slowly pulled his hand away, trying to shake the odd feeling he had just experienced. "And…and these are my friends, so you don't have to worry about them. You're safe with us." He didn't know why he was being so nice to her, so accepting. He just hoped the others wouldn't object.

     "You're lucky we found you out there, you know. Imagine what might have happened to you by now if we didn't," Dongwoo spoke up.

     Haneul cocked her head to the side slightly, looking outside. "Why? Is it…dangerous out there?"

     "Damn right it is," Woohyun said, "Especially for a pretty girl like you to be out there alone."

     "But you don

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lkimxxx
#1
Chapter 37: This story is amazing!
Wild_And_y #2
Chapter 31: Luv getting one karma pt for commenting!
aeru
#3
Chapter 37: Found this gem by chance, and I am so happy that I did. Literally had my mouth open in amazement the whole time I was reading this. The plot is like Romeo and Juliet with a bit of His Dark Materials (the whole aspect of 'sin') and even some Daughter of Smoke and Bone. Oh, this was just wonderful. And I suddenly just remembered that this is also like the 'Fallen' series by Tom Sniegoski. Keep up the good work, Author-nim :)
sendohime #4
Chapter 28: I need to reread this beautiful story! No clue where I left off, don't let this story go anywhere!
Mikka_
#5
Chapter 37: It was really really good! I'm so surprise by the end though .. I just can't belive something like that happend to her. I'm glad everythings seems alright at the end. I will definatly read the prequel! (I'm the type a reader who read only when the fiction is over so don't take it wrong if I didn't comment).
I really like your way of writting. Your despcrition and vocabularyare perfect! The plot is really interesing and different from what we are use to read. That's why I think your story is a masterpiece haha.
I have a question .. where did she put her wings when she go outside ? While I read I always have this question in my head xD
I hope you will made another story with Myungsoo on the main caracter.
Mikka_
#6
Chapter 32: God ..... O_O I so ... I choc by this chapter O_O just ... OMG !
Mikka_
#7
Chapter 1: Wooooooow your frist chapter is really good! I guess I'm gonna enjoy this story ((^o^))
SUJU4LIFE
#8
Chapter 37: Chinguuuuu~~~! I feel like I haven't talked to you in over a year!! (Of course I do, didn't you finish your last story over a year ago? :p) I'm not sure if I ever commented on this story, but I really had no time to comment on every chapter like I did with your previous story. School hates me.
Ok, first thing's first: the characters. Have I mentioned how much I love you for using Infinite (especially Myungsoo) as the main? No? Well, I really really really love you right now! I can't think of any group that would be more perfect for the role. Honestly, I'm not happy that BAP were evil, or that Youngjae died (since he was actually good in the end), but again, can't think of a better group for the role.
Second, the plot line. Again, have I mentioned how much I love your plots? Again, no? Well, let's just add two more reallys to the I love you! I love how the story just flowed smoothly and there was character development! Wow, you really know how to write a story! And I love everything from the simple chapter titles to the ending!
Lastly, my final rating for this story. Of course, it's another 20 out of 5 stars! You've earned it! Now, I'm going to subscribe to the prequel! Saranghae chingu~!
☆〜(ゝ。∂)
BabySpiritCc #9
Chapter 37: Thank you! This is a wonderful story! I like the way of how the oracles speak in such manner like poetry. It's really great! ^^