Crux

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     "Get healed up, then get some rest," Sungkyu said to L when they had made it home that night. With the help of Sungjong, Dongwoo, and Hoya, he had managed to convince L not to step up for any more fights—after what had happened in the alley, none of them wanted to see any more action.

     L shook his head at Sungkyu's words. "I'm fine."

     Sungkyu looked at him strangely. "What do you mean you're fine? You're covered in your own blood for Christ's sake, go get healed up."

     "I don't need her," L replied, and the conviction in his voice made Sungkyu hesitate. Of course, the explicit message was rejection of Haneul's healing powers, which would be understandable for a prideful fighter like L after losing a fight, but Sungkyu felt like they were suddenly discussing more than just that.

     "Who are you trying to convince, me or you?"

     L didn't reply as he disappeared to the bedroom for the night, where he took it upon himself to sleep in the bed farthest away from Haneul. Sungkyu knew he had him, but he wondered how long it would take before the stubborn boy would stop lying to himself; he wondered how long it would take before the boy would break.

 

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     It was late into the night when sound once again brought Zelo back to consciousness. Again he could hear footsteps, but this time they were coming towards him. A familiar voice chattered away while the other person walked in silence, but after a moment both the footsteps and the voice suddenly stopped.

     "Zelo?" Jongup called out as he and Himchan ran over to where he lay on the ground. ", help me lift him," said Jongup as they each grabbed one of his arms, "Come on, let's get you home." Zelo protested to the movement at first, but then stood up, his arms hanging over each of their shoulders. "Who the did this to you?" Jongup asked as Zelo looked up at him weakly.

     Zelo coughed, but then grabbed his side in pain. "In-Infinite."

     Himchan and Jongup glanced at each other, mutual anger appearing within their widened eyes. Before they ev

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lkimxxx
#1
Chapter 37: This story is amazing!
Wild_And_y #2
Chapter 31: Luv getting one karma pt for commenting!
aeru
#3
Chapter 37: Found this gem by chance, and I am so happy that I did. Literally had my mouth open in amazement the whole time I was reading this. The plot is like Romeo and Juliet with a bit of His Dark Materials (the whole aspect of 'sin') and even some Daughter of Smoke and Bone. Oh, this was just wonderful. And I suddenly just remembered that this is also like the 'Fallen' series by Tom Sniegoski. Keep up the good work, Author-nim :)
sendohime #4
Chapter 28: I need to reread this beautiful story! No clue where I left off, don't let this story go anywhere!
Mikka_
#5
Chapter 37: It was really really good! I'm so surprise by the end though .. I just can't belive something like that happend to her. I'm glad everythings seems alright at the end. I will definatly read the prequel! (I'm the type a reader who read only when the fiction is over so don't take it wrong if I didn't comment).
I really like your way of writting. Your despcrition and vocabularyare perfect! The plot is really interesing and different from what we are use to read. That's why I think your story is a masterpiece haha.
I have a question .. where did she put her wings when she go outside ? While I read I always have this question in my head xD
I hope you will made another story with Myungsoo on the main caracter.
Mikka_
#6
Chapter 32: God ..... O_O I so ... I choc by this chapter O_O just ... OMG !
Mikka_
#7
Chapter 1: Wooooooow your frist chapter is really good! I guess I'm gonna enjoy this story ((^o^))
SUJU4LIFE
#8
Chapter 37: Chinguuuuu~~~! I feel like I haven't talked to you in over a year!! (Of course I do, didn't you finish your last story over a year ago? :p) I'm not sure if I ever commented on this story, but I really had no time to comment on every chapter like I did with your previous story. School hates me.
Ok, first thing's first: the characters. Have I mentioned how much I love you for using Infinite (especially Myungsoo) as the main? No? Well, I really really really love you right now! I can't think of any group that would be more perfect for the role. Honestly, I'm not happy that BAP were evil, or that Youngjae died (since he was actually good in the end), but again, can't think of a better group for the role.
Second, the plot line. Again, have I mentioned how much I love your plots? Again, no? Well, let's just add two more reallys to the I love you! I love how the story just flowed smoothly and there was character development! Wow, you really know how to write a story! And I love everything from the simple chapter titles to the ending!
Lastly, my final rating for this story. Of course, it's another 20 out of 5 stars! You've earned it! Now, I'm going to subscribe to the prequel! Saranghae chingu~!
☆〜(ゝ。∂)
BabySpiritCc #9
Chapter 37: Thank you! This is a wonderful story! I like the way of how the oracles speak in such manner like poetry. It's really great! ^^