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     “Flowing rivers fade to red with poison to accrue,
     Windows to the world take on a slightly duller hue.

     “Seeds that drift along the breeze, root yourselves in place,
     Light that makes the flower bloom, dimmer down your grace.

     “Hollow branches fill with rings that count along your age,
     Without flight the little bird no longer needs a cage.”

     With her silvery white hair pulled back into a neat braid and her smooth, fair skin slightly beaded with sweat above her brow, Haeyang sat in deep concentration before a stone bowl of steaming water with various leaves, roots, and berries steeping within. As she swirled its contents, the bowl became increasingly warm until it’s scalding contents would be unbearable to touch. Now infused with the power of the Ancients, Haeyang dipped her bare hands into the water, but her skin did not burn. Instead, the energy flowed through her, transcending the barrier between this realm and the next, and she continued the incantation she had been uttering.

 

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     “We’ve concluded that the majority of her symptoms were the result of heavy metal poisoning, but we really can’t locate the cause,” the doctor announced upon his return, “The fever didn’t make sense either, and for how much copper there was in her blood, the effects on the brain and liver appeared considerably low. Copper levels must have only elevated very recently, which is a very strange case.”

     L glanced at the others uncertainly. He was sure that wasn’t the only thing strange the doctors had found about Haneul.

     “With how high her temperature was, she very well shouldn't have been alive when you brought her in," the doctor shook his head in disbelief, then pat L on the shoulder, "She's very lucky.”

     Infinite knew better than to feel relieved just yet. They knew this wasn’t over until Haneul was safely back with them.

     “Now, we could run some additional tests, try to pinpoint the cause of the poisoning. If it was such a sudden onset, it most likely involved environmental influences. Has she moved recently? Maybe a change in diet?”

     L tensed at the word ‘tests’. “No, and I don’t think that will be necessary,” he said, maybe a little too quickly. “She’s been through a lot, I think she’d rather just rest.”

     “Very well,” the doctor nodded empathetically.

     He waited for the ‘but’, the ‘however’, the ‘there’s something else we need to discuss’. But it never came. The doctor gave them one last reassuring smile, then disappeared to deal with another patient.

     As Infinite began to hear the details from the nurses about how Haneul’s tests had gone, they were more and more astounded by the results, but not for the same reason as the doctors. When heavy metal poisoning was suspected, an x-ray had been conducted for arsenic or thallium presence in her abdomen. The doctors saw no abnormalities; Infinite sa

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lkimxxx
#1
Chapter 37: This story is amazing!
Wild_And_y #2
Chapter 31: Luv getting one karma pt for commenting!
aeru
#3
Chapter 37: Found this gem by chance, and I am so happy that I did. Literally had my mouth open in amazement the whole time I was reading this. The plot is like Romeo and Juliet with a bit of His Dark Materials (the whole aspect of 'sin') and even some Daughter of Smoke and Bone. Oh, this was just wonderful. And I suddenly just remembered that this is also like the 'Fallen' series by Tom Sniegoski. Keep up the good work, Author-nim :)
sendohime #4
Chapter 28: I need to reread this beautiful story! No clue where I left off, don't let this story go anywhere!
Mikka_
#5
Chapter 37: It was really really good! I'm so surprise by the end though .. I just can't belive something like that happend to her. I'm glad everythings seems alright at the end. I will definatly read the prequel! (I'm the type a reader who read only when the fiction is over so don't take it wrong if I didn't comment).
I really like your way of writting. Your despcrition and vocabularyare perfect! The plot is really interesing and different from what we are use to read. That's why I think your story is a masterpiece haha.
I have a question .. where did she put her wings when she go outside ? While I read I always have this question in my head xD
I hope you will made another story with Myungsoo on the main caracter.
Mikka_
#6
Chapter 32: God ..... O_O I so ... I choc by this chapter O_O just ... OMG !
Mikka_
#7
Chapter 1: Wooooooow your frist chapter is really good! I guess I'm gonna enjoy this story ((^o^))
SUJU4LIFE
#8
Chapter 37: Chinguuuuu~~~! I feel like I haven't talked to you in over a year!! (Of course I do, didn't you finish your last story over a year ago? :p) I'm not sure if I ever commented on this story, but I really had no time to comment on every chapter like I did with your previous story. School hates me.
Ok, first thing's first: the characters. Have I mentioned how much I love you for using Infinite (especially Myungsoo) as the main? No? Well, I really really really love you right now! I can't think of any group that would be more perfect for the role. Honestly, I'm not happy that BAP were evil, or that Youngjae died (since he was actually good in the end), but again, can't think of a better group for the role.
Second, the plot line. Again, have I mentioned how much I love your plots? Again, no? Well, let's just add two more reallys to the I love you! I love how the story just flowed smoothly and there was character development! Wow, you really know how to write a story! And I love everything from the simple chapter titles to the ending!
Lastly, my final rating for this story. Of course, it's another 20 out of 5 stars! You've earned it! Now, I'm going to subscribe to the prequel! Saranghae chingu~!
☆〜(ゝ。∂)
BabySpiritCc #9
Chapter 37: Thank you! This is a wonderful story! I like the way of how the oracles speak in such manner like poetry. It's really great! ^^