Title:- 3/5– The title was not that catchy.. It’s nice that you used your title based in one of the song which a lot of authors are doing. I also suggest choosing a title that would catch reader’s attention and you must use a title that is well connected to the story. ^^ I know it’s hard to think of a title but I know you could do it. ^^

 Poster/Background:- 5/10– The poster is not well-made. The pictures were kind of small that’s why it’s hard to identify the character’s faces. I think it would be also nice if you could make your poster bigger. Posters are your bridge to catch the reader’s eyes. ^^ If you don’t know how to edit pictures you may request from many graphic shops in AFF. They would help you make a good and awesome poster for your fanfic. ^^

 Description, Foreword and plot:- 17/20 – Your Description is really good and interesting. When you read it you will be curious and exited in reading the fanfic although there are some wrong spellings and incorrect usage of grammars. Watch out for that. ^^ For your foreword which is I think your plot too... You made a preview of your story to make your readers feel excited and wanted to read your fic more. That’s good. And you talk to your readers well.  

 Creativity/Uniqueness:- 18/20- *claps*... Your creativity and uniqueness of story is really good. I haven’t seen a fanfic like this before. The idea is really good although I think it’s quite impossible to happen in real life. But your story’s uniqueness is again really good. Keep up the good work!. ^^

Flow:- 6/10- The flow of your story is scruffy the main character which is Danny you did not explain how did Danny get to be so close with SS501 that fast so it’s kind of confusing for the readers. And I think it’s quite impossible to happen. Readers want to read that it’s possible to happen in real life. ^^

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:- 6/10- As I said in your foreword... There are some incorrect usages of words. One example the use of your plural verbs... You always use plural verbs which is sometimes it doesn’t to change the particular word. And also using your past tense some sentences should be also used by past tense. Don’t worry your English is really good and also your vocabulary.

 
Characterisation:- 8/10- I knew SS501 but I don’t really know what their attitudes really are. But I think you really know them well that’s why your portrayed each and every character really good. This made me imagine their personalities while reading your fic. That’s why I gave you a high remark for that.

Writing Style:- 7/10- Your writing style is good... It’s not messy to look and I suggest you to use fonts or font size to emphasize your story more. I think it would be nicer to read. ^^ but don't use font color that hurts the readers eyes.

Excitement:- 3/5- It’s quite interesting to keep an eye on the events or the happenings of the story your writing. ^^   

Extras:- 4/5- You talk to your readers really well.. And you kept telling them that you will do your best and it’s really nice to see you work hard for your fanfic.

TOTAL = 77 : Keep up the good work. ^^

So happy, thank you to ilubshinee for the review!! i need to work up more upon my grammars (always my biggest problem in English, i'm not a native speaker of English. But i love english). Hmm..gonna work hard for my Run Before My pinky bunny oppa come!!