Unbelievable Date.

Hello, Mr. Perfect!

Jonghyun's Point Of View

"Yo hyung!" Taemin high fived me as I sat in my leather chair. Jinki, Minho, Taemin, and Kibum sat on the couch as I looked at them.

"So what's are you plan Hyung?" Taemin said as I looked around, spinning in my chair. 
"To get rid of that, Junhyung boy.' I said as Kibum smirked.

"But, aren't you in some kind of deal with that Seunghee girl?" Kibum said as I nodded as I scoffed.

"I just want ____ back, doesn't mean I have to negotiate with her." I said as Taemin, and the rest of them looked the other way.

"Just get ready, we are going to go late tonight. Minho, grab your gun."

 

3rd Person Point Of View

 

Junhyung and you were getting ready, because Junhyung wanted to take you on a date. You followed along as you dressed yourself well. 

On the other hand, Seunghee and Jonghyun wore black clothing, so did Eunhee. 

Eunhee called Gikwang as he answered the phone.

"Yeah baby girl?" Gikwang said as Eunhee spoke closely to the speaker.

"I'll be late tonight, make you sure eat dinner okay honey?" Eunhee said as Gikwang laughed.

"Only for you, I'll see you later babe." They hung up.

Junhyung and you walked out of the house, holding hands as you rested your head on his shoulders.

"Where are we going?" You said as he smiled,

"You'll see." He smiled as you two walked to Seoul Park, you looked around as you walked closely next to him.

They walked though a garden walk way, as Junhyung clapped. The flowers started to lit up, as everything glowed, you looked forward and saw Jonghyun.

"What the hell is he doing here?!" You said as Junhyung looked towards him.

"Big entrance much head?" Junhyung said as Jonghyun chuckled. His clothes were black, and then closely behind 4 boys gathered.

"Who the hell are they?" Junhyung said as you held onto Junhyung tightly.

"Heh, Seunghee yah, Eunhee ah." Jonghyun said as your eyes widened.

"EONNI?" You said as Eunhee appeared linked arms with Seunghee, you gasped as Eunhee smirked.

"I'll never forgive you for what you did." Eunhee said as your eyes widened as you looked at Junhyung. 

"What should we do Oppa?" You said as Junhyung sighed.

"Run." Junhyung said as he gripped onto your hand as he swung around, you guys ran as fast as you guys could. Jonghyun smiled.

"Shoot" Jonghyun commanded as Minho pointed his gun at Junhyung's shoulder. Minho put his finger on the trigger as he pulled it. The bullet spiraled hitting Junhyung in the arm. The failing Junhyung spiraled to the ground as you looked at him laying on the ground holding his shoulder.

"YAH!!! WHO SAID YOU COULD DO THAT!?" Seunghee screamed.

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hunhunhunhun
#1
Chapter 33: MY FEELS TT-TT
doubleuxo
#2
You know, this story had me cry hard. Yes, junhyung is my bias. Now, you make my love more for him. Seriously I'm a girl who do not like crying. But, when read your fanfics, it's make me cry. You shouldn't say it comedy, you should said it's sad or maybe tragedy.
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Im seriously crying right now!!! I cant see anything...... I thought that junhyung would survive and he would get out of the hosptail and they would have a baby and theyre going to have a happy ending!!!!
I thought it was a comedy!!!! This is not comedy this is tragedy ㅠ.ㅠ even though this is a sad stpry this made me cry for almost half an hour and i could see my trash bin filled with tissues ㅠ.ㅠ ( ; _ ; )/~~~
timeofmylife03 #4
This is so depressing ㅠ.ㅠ
But I loved it! Wow. <3
shinning4ever #5
I read quite a number of sad ending..some cry but not long..but this one make me cry for 15min...so sad..why junhyung must die...:(
jongdaepng
#6
I was reading Chapters 30-32 while listening to 'The name I loved' By Onew from SHINee. And I can't help but cry. I really can't believe Junhyung died. :(<br />
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I promised myself I would never read stories like this, but I just keep on reading it. Sigh. :( I love how you write it. I can hear my own heart crying too. LOL. ;_;
exo-ai
#7
Koizora inspired? ;)
urijunpa #8
i was kinda feel like dejavu when i read the ending..<br />
coz i feel that i ever see it or somethin..<br />
then you say..it is from koizora...<br />
<br />
well i'll remember it finally..<br />
i loved that ending too ^^<br />
<br />
thank u for makin me more in love with junhyungie ~~~^^
wookhee #9
djhashdlahfjlafhjahfkjl! I dunno what to say but that was really AWESOME ! I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT !!! <3333
ianaheartshindongho #10
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ~~ this <br />
is really a nice story ^^ love it !