Review for +=Many Faces Of Love=+ (by elf_verl)
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Fanfic Title: +=Many Faces Of Love=+
Description: This is a romance story of people who are stuck in the vortex of love. It explores siblings love, friends love, boy-girl love, and others. "What will you do when you are caught in the vortex of love, and had to make the choice between the one you love and the one who loves you? Will you be able to clearly differentiate between right and wrong?"
Entertainment level: 80%
Reviewer: Gothic-Neko-Girl
Description: This is a romance story of people who are stuck in the vortex of love. It explores siblings love, friends love, boy-girl love, and others. "What will you do when you are caught in the vortex of love, and had to make the choice between the one you love and the one who loves you? Will you be able to clearly differentiate between right and wrong?"
Entertainment level: 80%
Reviewer: Gothic-Neko-Girl
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Title 4/5
The title is very eye catching but I think it could do without the plus and equal signs
Graphics/Posters 3/5
Deducted a few points because there's no osters nor background
Foreword/Description 9/10
Your description made the story, to me, sound a bit cliche yet had a sense of suspense and it sparked my interest and curiousity.
Originality 7/10
Not very original. In my (almost) year on AFF, I've read multiple stories with the main character being an orphan or he/she bumps into their love interest who they meet later on. Though, you put a bit of your
own 'spice' into the story which made it somewhat unique
Plot 16/20
As I said before, there are a lot of orphan stories and this was slightly cliche. Also as I said before, the hint of your own spice and uniqueness incorporated into the story helped give this a bit more points
Grammar/Spelling 29/30
No grammar mistakes but there were the occassional spelling mistakes, i.e. Chapter 1: Al should be All and Chapter 6: Racquet should be Racket (which you wrote later on with correct spelling)
Flow 10/10
The flow was smooth and the transitions in the beginning between past and present were fine
Neatness 5/5
Nice, spaced out paragraphs to make it easier to read
Extra 5/5
Personally, I never EVER read stories that either have the reader in it or an OC. This story was a very rare exception that I made for this review and I have to say, I enjoyed it. Keep writing, okay?
Total: 88/100
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