Fanfic Title: Hourglass
Description: -
Entertainment level: 60%
Reviewer: BubblesSweet

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Title—4/5
It reminded me of a super villain named Hourglass xD Lol, anywho, the title drew me in.

Graphics/Posters—4/5
The poster had this feeling of mystery and so I had the feeling of reading it more.

Foreword/Description-5/10
The description was nicely done. But the words in the ‘graphic’ were blurry so you lose marks there. And the grammar should be in past tense, for example: They become best of friends. It should be: They became best of friends. And well, some of it didn’t make sense.

Originality—7/10
I’ve seen these types of stories, not just one but many.

Plot—18/20
It was fine.

Grammar/Spelling—25/30
I spotted a few awkward sentences and the mistake in your foreword. You also had a couple of grammar mistakes so you lose points there.

Flow—8/10
Great, keep it up.

Neatness-4/5
It was very neat! I loved it.

Extra-3/ 5
Points are given for my enjoyment over reading this fanfic of yours.

Total: 78/100 points

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