Review for Carnivorous (by FallingArrows)
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Fanfic Title: Carnivorous
Description: This is a story about a girl that finds an island. On this island, she finds people, but they are not normal. In fact, they are hardly humans. They are....carnivorous.
Entertainment level: 90%
Reviewer: myungfox
Description: This is a story about a girl that finds an island. On this island, she finds people, but they are not normal. In fact, they are hardly humans. They are....carnivorous.
Entertainment level: 90%
Reviewer: myungfox
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Title— 5/5
Carnivorous . Simple, short and full of mystery. To me anyways ^^ I like it.
Graphics/Posters— 5/5
Your poster was so suited with the story, it’s filled with intensity and it slightly scares me hahaha ;-; Did you make it yourself?
Foreword/Description- 9/10
You description and foreword is like a normal novel. The type of novels that I would read. Everything about it attracts me.
Originality- 9/10
I’ve never seen a story like this before so originality marks goes to you~
Plot- 18/20
Your plot is good. It makes me want to read more. It’s full of adventure and supernatural things and it really caught my attention.
Grammar/Spelling— 33/35
Your grammar and spelling was almost flawless. Although in chapter one I spotted a typo (?) maybe?
Here it is;
“I’ve even tried sneaking into he’s forbidden study, until I found out that he’s put silent alarms and lasers in the room to keep me out.”
I think you meant; “I’ve tried sneaking into his forbidden study, until I found out that he put silent alarms and lasers in the room to keep me out.”
Other than that mistake, there was nothing wrong with your usage of grammar. No typos.
Flow- 3/5
It wasn’t fast or slow. It was just fine
Neatness- 4/5
It was neat. I liked how neatly you arranged everything. Although I find myself confused sometimes ;;
Extra- 4 /5
Overall, your story was good. I’d love to read more. Am I being to biased? I guess your story really attracted me.
Total - 90/100
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Wow, you've got quite a high mark from our most strict reviewer there x) Anyway! Thank you for requesting from our shop and do come again with a new story for us to review ^^ Or if you'd like, we'd review the same story of yours and see whether there's any improvements! Don't forget to credit~
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