Reviewer: BubblesSweet

.........................................................................................................

Title-3/5
Honestly, it drew me in. But, points were deducted because titles are supposed to be capitalized. Do capitalize yours such as: ‘Why Won’t You Take Me Seriously?’ Eventhough it is just capitalization, but it is quiet important. Like names, names of people are all capitalized, countries, cities, places are also capitalized.

Graphics/Posters—4/5
I think the poster-looking banner is quiet cute! And I highly ship Baekyeol, haha.

Foreword/Description-6/10
I adored the description because it drew me in deeper to your story. Good job!
Though I have to correct this: ... until that day when Chanyeol finally lost it.
To: ... until the day when Chanyeol finally lost it.
Correct this: He confessed and and showed more…
To this: He confessed, and showed more….

But other points are deducted due to the size of the font. People aren’t blind or something. I suggest you put the size font to 12 or 14.

Originality—5/10
I have seen these types of fanfics before so you lose points there.

Plot—19/20
I can’t really say the plotting is great yet since you’re just at chapter 4. But this story really drew me in since the description, lol.

Grammar/Spelling—20/30
Correct this: Months have passed since I joined SM. Feels like years. 
To this: Months have passed since I joined SM. Itfelt like years.

Correct this:  Me and Chanyeol are like that.
To This:  Chanyeol and I are usually like that.
(chapter 1)

Correct this: I should've known that he just forget about that. 
To this: I knew that he would forget about it.

Correct this: "I was waiting for you, let's get dress together!"
To this: "I was waiting for you, let's get dressed together!"
(chapter 2)

Correct this: And with only 8 takes he perfects his parts.
To this: And with only 8 takes, he perfected his parts.

Correct this: WTF? Deep and attractive voice? Perfect? Chanyeol? What the hell is going on my mind?
To this: WTF? Deep and attractive voice? Perfect? Chanyeol? What the hell is going on with my mind?

Correct this: …his deep voice kept on piercing my ears as he moves closer to my face.
To this: …his deep voice kept on piercing into my ears as he moved closer to my face.
(chapter 4)

Though there are other mistakes but they aren't noticeable so no worries. I hope you take my advice and corrections a way to improve yourself.

Flow—8/10
The flow was great! I loved the part where Suho and Sehun came at the time they were (about to) kiss. It was pretty funny. How you made it flow was just nice. Keep it that way.

Neatness-4/5
It was pretty neat, I can say. And I like how you have those little conversations at the bottom of each chapter, it amuses me.

Extra- 5/5
BAEKYEOL SHIPPERS FTW

Total: 74/100 points

............................................................................................................

Thanks for requesting from our shop! Sorry for being strict >< And no hard feelings~ We hope to review a story from you soon! Don't forget to credit the shop and the reviewer ^^