Review for Time Machine (by lolliderellad2nd)
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Fanfic Title: Time Machine
Description: "One mistake, got one regret"
Entertainment level: 90%
Reviewer: myungfox
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Title – 4/5
Well, the title caught my eye. Really, it did.
Graphics / Posters – 4/5
Foreword/ Description – 4/5
Originality – 7/10
Plot – 18/20
Well, since the idea came from a song,not much originality there but I like how you told about Yeonhee and Jiyong's breakup.
Well, since the idea came from a song,not much originality there but I like how you told about Yeonhee and Jiyong's breakup.
Grammar + Spelling – 31/35
Hardly one error to be found!! Let me love you ;__; Although there were some sentences that didn't make any sense but probably safe to ignore.
Flow – 4/5
Neatness – 4/5
Extra – 2/5
I'll tell you one thing, it's rare for me to give out high marks considering I am quite strict. But if I like a story, ( by like I mean in terms of grammar and such) then I like it. I loved how your story was so intense (to me it was) and I really enjoyed reading it.
I'll tell you one thing, it's rare for me to give out high marks considering I am quite strict. But if I like a story, ( by like I mean in terms of grammar and such) then I like it. I loved how your story was so intense (to me it was) and I really enjoyed reading it.
Total – 81/100
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