Fanfic Title:  My Happiness, My Everything
Description: Jung Su Jin, lives in a poor family as an only child with parents that could care less of her as they either drink or fight everynight. But the worst part about her life was that she was a victom of . The night she had lost her ity was also the night she had lost herself. Sinking into the cold, dark, and lonely side of the world fear and hate of life arises inside of her. The boy next door seems to be somewhat connected to her and soon helps her open up to the world.
Entertainment level: 85%
Reviewer: Gothic-Neko-Girl

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Title 5/5
Eye-catching, different in my opinion, and I just liked it

Graphics/Posters 5/5
The black background gives it that mysterious feel though and the posters also gives the same feeling. I like it a lot

Foreward/Description 10/10
The description was not that original but it's short, simple, explains your plot, and I like it. I also like how you don't introduce your characters like some authors, it gets quite annoying at times

Originality 7/10
Like I said before, not that original to me. I've read a lot of victims who become depressed and their love interest helps them out. 

Plot 17/20
Same thing with the originality, the plot is like other stories that I've read. I didn't take off a lot of points because I can tell you tried to add a bit of your own style which made this a bit of a unique plot

Grammar/Spelling 29/30
Grammar's fine and there were a few spelling mistakes (just tiny ones)

Chapter 2: Yeon Ji snorted titling her lips up to a smirk, "Exactly, now that you know who the low life loser is, you ccan ome sit w-" Titling - Tilting & ccan ome - can come

Flow 9/10
I have no problem with the flow of the story. Though, I dislike it when people change the colors. (That’s just my personal opinion)

Neatness 4/5
Pretty neat though, try not have big paragraph blocks like in chapter 1. For me, big paragraphs just hurt my eyes.

Extra 4/5
Some parts caught my attention and some just didn‘t. This is another rare exception I make since it's not the typical fanfic I read so, just 1 point taken off here.

Total: 90/100 points

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