Review for She Came With Calm Storms (for ktcyab)
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Description: Soo Nami runs away from her home to escape her parents strict order. She begins her life wandering around the outskirts of Seoul. Through her journey, she meets five men one by one who all seem to have a connection with each other's past. Something stirs among the six and a confession is revealed.
Title—5/5
Honestly, it caught my eye.
Graphics/Posters—4/5
I love it!
Foreword/Description-9/10
I just love how you made it so simple and interesting. Like, like, like!
Originality—9/10
Certainly was original, didn’t expect anything like it.
Plot—18/20
Nicely done.
Grammar/Spelling—28/30
Damn, just three words for you. I love you.
Though there are a few typos (?)
(What you've written)
Chapter two. “Why does Giu, a girl a barely know,...”
Chapter three: “So? Whoever says here needs to pay.”
Flow—9/10
Not too fast, not too slow.
Neatness—4/5
I love fanfics like yours 8D
Extra—4/5
Extra for the enjoyment I had upon your fanfic (:
Total: 90/100 points
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Olala. You got 90% which means that your fanfic will be the first story in Bacon & Egg's 'Featured Stories'! Thank you for requesting at our shop and we hope to review another one of yours again! Please credit the reviewer and the shop. Thank you once again!
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