Fanfic Title: Sment Town, The Place of No Return
Description: Meet Krystal, a disturbed young girl who has been sent to a small town called Sment to live with her aunt following the tragic death of her parents. She is thought by her aunt to have some sort of mental illness, as Krystal believes her house to be haunted. Only Krystal is aware of the restless spirits, which only feeds the doctor's and her aunt's suspicions about Krystal's well-being. The house was a mental hospital, then a school for juvenile delinquents. The ghosts know Krystal can see them and they won't leave her alone! A recluse, she sneaks out with her only friend, Taemin, and together they discover a lost graveyard. There they find a sunken mausoleum, where Krystal reads from a stone engraving. This act binds her to a contract requiring Krystal to release spirits stuck somewhere between an unhappy life and a peaceful afterlife. If she refuses, she will face an eternity of hell. So Krystal begins her quest of "cleaning" the vaults, crypts, and graves of lost souls, all the while struggling with the haunts at home and suspicions of her growing mental illness.
Entertainment level: 75%
Reviewer: Turnbaek

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Title- 4/5 
The title made me really interested about your story, so good job!

Graphics/Posters- 4/5
I like your poster, it gives off a really mysterious feel, especially the graveyard.

Foreword/Description- 9/10
Both your foreword and description was well done, but you might want to put the credits in your foreword instead of putting them in the description.

Originality- 10/10
I have never read any story with a similar plot as yours.

Plot- 10/10
I really love your plot and there is nothing to say about it. ^^

Grammar/Spelling- 27/30
A few grammar and spelling errors here and there but it's okay, nobody is perfect. 

Flow- 6/10
Your flow is going a little bit too fast. Some people will skip your foreword and description and go straight to chapter one, and they will be really confused. Who is Dr Choi? Why does Dr Choi and your aunt hate Taemin? I feel that you should make a proper introduction in chapter one before starting the drama already.

Neatness- 1/5
I find it annoying that you keep changing POVs. Here's a tip for you: write in third person. And your chapters are incredibly short.

Extra- 4/5
I enjoyed your story alot, despite it's short chapters. I hope I didn't offend you in any way. (:

Total- 75/100