Review for You Make Me Stronger (for tayree)
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Description: Sungjong always makes an effort to be positive, no matter what. Even when he is faced with the difficult task of entering a new school, he walks in with a smile and quickly makes new friends. But when he meets a quiet and unresponsive boy in his art class, he is at a loss for words...literally.
Though the title fits the story, it is not really that eye-catching..
Graphics / Posters – 5/5
I love your graphics! The background fits with the poster so full marks hurhur. OuO;
Foreword/ Description – 6/10
Your description is quite short, but the good point is that it didn’t give out too much about your story.
You had a prologue in your foreword which made me want to jump in immediately and read more but where is the short introduction of the characters and the author's note?...
Originality / plot – 20/25
To say quite honestly I've read quite an amount of stories which has a similar plot as yours. But I can see that you tried your best in making your story more unique so good job!
Grammar + Spelling – 30/30
I didn't see any mistakes! ^-^
Flow – 10/10
The story is flowing at a perfect pace.
Enjoyment – 13/15
This is my first time reading T^T" I don't like stories but I enjoyed reading your story! I love the way you write and how you portrayed the personalities of Infinite.
Total – 87/100
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