Review for 20 Steps to Ruining His Perfect Life (by YourFaceisPretty)

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Fanfic Title:  20 Steps to Ruining His Perfect Life
Description: March 13th: Kyung Eun-Joo was dumped by the man she loved most, Choi Seunghyun (TOP from Big Bang). She then finds out 3 years later that he has had 8 girlfriends in the past week, and he is currently enjoying the glorious life as a famous Hallyu star. Jealousy, angst, fear, and a big ball of emotions are thrown into her life. She feels broken, dead, unwanted.....Unhappy in every way. She's been living as an earnest girl that's always been loyal to everyone and everything, hoping that one day she's live the good life with no fear nor sorrow. Seeing his success drove her to the edge of her patience. She knew she couldn't let this slide. Not until Eun-Joo comes up with ways of ruining his perfect life, and finally taking revenge and avenging her broken heart.
Entertainment level: 75%
Reviewer: myungfox

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Title – 3/5
I've been seeing tons of titles like '__ Steps to __ / __Ways to __' etc, so yeah.
 
Graphics / Posters – 4/5
 
Foreword/ Description – 6/10
The foreword was interesting. A little sneak peak of the story.
 
Originality – 7/10
 
Plot – 10/20
I like your plot, it was good.
 
Grammar + Spelling – 25/35
There were a few typos and a few grammar mistakes, I would like to point it out but I kinda lost where the errors were. T__T I'm so stressed! I'm sorry.
 
Flow – 2/5
 
Neatness – 3/5
It was neat at first but then it got a little messy later on.
 
Extra – 2/5
 
Total – 52/100 
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