Middle Age Woman

Beauty and The Best

This is a cover I made but i didn't know the best name of the fanfic yet so i just named it "beast beauty" for now!

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“she is totally weird.”, I said, but it didn’t seem that anyone want to listen to it.
“and kind.”, Yujin said with huge smiled on her face.
-she left clinic before her turn, why do you think she left for? She knows you, and it’s not a good thing.
-are you paranoid? Maybe an urgent matter came up for her, and she said she mixed me with someone else.
-what if she was lying?
-why do you care?
-cause you have relationship with me, for the sake of god we are going to married, isn’t it normal for me to be worried about you?
Everything was deadly silent, she opened her moth twice to speak but I could the word didn’t managed to run on her tongue and even me didn’t know how to  speak.
My phone rang suddenly and break the deadly silent, the caller ID said, it was Luhan:
“Hello?”-me
“Hi. Is your hand okay?”-Luhan
“how do you know? Can you guys just keep one secret on your mouth?”, I yelled at Baekhyun.
Baekhyun smirked at me but didn’t move his gaze from the road and kept driving.
“Calm down bro. By the way I’m calling for something else, mother wants to go shopping with Yujin, is she okay with it?”-Luhan
“don’t know.”, I said then I turned my face at Yujin, who was looking at me with her curios soft eyes, “do you want to go shopping with my mom?”
“are you coming too?”, she asked worriedly and made me smirk.
“will you miss me?”
“No, just don’t want to be alone.”, she answered and turned her face from me to focus on the road.
“so if it’s that yeah I will come.”
“who else dose come?”, I asked on the phone again, and turned my face from her.
“Just me, don’t worry.”-Luhan
“sounds good.”-me


“okay mom here is what you want, Yujin, now do you need us around?”, I asked and looked at her happy face.
“I don’t think but I will call you when our little shop end, we need someone to carry them, you know your mother isn’t young anymore.”, she said calmly and smiled gently at me.
“You are not old.”, I said and rolled my eyes at her then I turned to face Yujin who was strangely silent since we arrived, “call me if any thing happened.”
Am I over protective about her? something was going on and I could feel the smell of it under my nose.
“in the case anything happened, I can handle it by myself, specially if it was a middle age woman case.”, she said in cold blood and calm smile that made me even nerves.
I looked at her and she looked back with raised eyebrow that the meaning was she can’t help it.
“what’s wrong with middle ages women?”, my mother ask curiously.
“nothing.”, she said with smiled and got my mother arm with respect, “bye-bye Sehun.”
Then both of them their heels and left us alone.
“Sehun? What’s wrong? She was just a normal woman.”, Baekhyun said and rolled his eyes.
“she isn’t, just remember the way she looked at her.”, I said with
-just remained of her favorite student.
“Okay, would you like some ice cream?”, Luhan said in order to cut both of us, “do you know what is her favorite taste?”
“No.”, I said simply but I looked at Luhan amused when I saw his expiration.
“What?”, I asked.
“You don’t even know this? At least you should asked her about her favorites, it’s first step of getting into relationship.”, Luhan nagged at me like mother.
“okay, I ask her later, just buy her strawberry one.”, I said, “all of the girl like pink.”
Luhan looked at me in doubt and disbelief but I can’t help but shrugged my shoulder at him, was it really that bad for me to didn’t know her taste in things? We were not that kind of couple that date for long time with each other and get to know each other well, she didn’t know mine too, but why did I feel guilty? Just God know.
Luhan went to ice cream shop and I fellow him with my gaze, he maybe was a best choice to be in my place, romantic, manly and soft that every girl would dream about.
“Are you still suspicious?” ,Baekhyun asked and patted my back gently.
Before I could get time to answer; my phone rang and that was exactly what I didn’t need.
“I don’t want to hear bad news.”, I said on the phone.
“so shouldn’t I tell?”, Teamin asked, “by the way Sehun I think you couldn’t waste any time.”
“What do you mean where are you?”-me
“someone is fallowing your mother and fiancée-”
“What? Where are they now?”, I cut him off worriedly and stood up from my seat.
“what’s wrong?”, Luhan asked when he reached us with a tray of ice cream in his hand.
“You know fish market, nah? They are about-”
Before he could complete his sentence I hang up the phone. 
I could just felt sick to my stomach from the strass that I felt, what if any thing happened to them? What if I can’t protect them? My biggest fear started to overtook me.
“fish market.”, I said and ran trough the crowd, I just know my way nothing else I could not even answer if anyone asked.
We arrived there sooner than I  guess, the fear made my feet to run faster.
“Luhan stayed with them.”, I ordered and he rushed to the fish market, the tray was still in his hand.
I look around there was no sign of Teamin.
‘just think properly Sehun!’, I took a deep breath.
“Where the hell is Teamin?”, I asked maybe a little loud, cause everyone around us noticed it but I didn’t care at that moment.
“there.”, Baekhyun pointed at the empty alley no one notice that too people was fighting on it, which itself is kind of awkward.
Teamin was there and was busy .The anonymous woman punch Teamin from side to his face, but he managed to blocked her he is one of the best in fight that I ever seen in my life maybe third one after me and my father.
The woman was talented too and unfortunately smarter. Her movement was too swiftly that I barely saw her and Teamin couldn’t do anything but accept her punch on his stomached on her second try.
She was very good that made me wonder how can a woman be that good at marshal art, better than Teamin and maybe as good as me.
Teamin fell on the floor so we had to complete his job.
“who are you?”, Baekhyun asked when entered the empty alley with me. She looked at both of us, she was wearing a black mask but I could see her innocent eyes, maybe a little too innocent for the one who attacked someone and deeply familiar, maybe I saw her few hours ago at the clinic.
She was the one who cut off our eye contact by throwing a fit at me that I barely managed to block.
“My brother asked you, ‘who are you?’, I didn’t hear the answer.”, I said but she punched me again and this time I got his wrist and tightened my hand around hers, and she looked at me and could see her panicked eyes, she wasn’t young and it make me suspicious even more.
But this time I could see something more than familiar and unfortunately it made me to loss my focus on her.
She kicked me in the feet that I would feel on the ground if it wasn’t for Baekhyun who stood Teamin up and got me, and she just ran through crowd an disappeared.
I my heel and head to a fish market but someone stopped me just when I took first step and I knew it wasn’t going to be a good thing. 
Teamin looked at me with anxious eyes.
“your fiancée isn’t there.”, he said and bit his lips, “she didn’t stayed with your mother and exit the fish market, this woman followed her so I tried to followed her too, but she found it out and we  were involved in fight.”
I took a deep breath cause it was the only thing I could do, it wasn’t Teamin fault but I was mad at him and can’t control the fact that Yujin wasn’t around and could be in deranged didn’t help at all.
“I bet she was the woman in the clinic Baekhyun.”, I said and looked at him angrily and he didn’t response in back maybe he knew it too, “just find her wherever the hell is she.”


‘Why the hell she turned off her damn phone?’, I said and finally gave up on calling her back-to-back.
She wasn’t a little girl too get lost and it was the fact made me unease even more.
I looked around carelessly but even with not hundred present of my focus I can recognized short thin girl with her pony tail hair, the only thing that I couldn’t understand was the little boy that was hand to hand with her.

Y U J I N:

It’s not that I scared of fish or sea animal but  I just disgusted in it.

Every one in our family love sea food and I felt bad most if the time that they didn’t eat it when I home cause the know I hate them.

Hopefully Sehun wasn’t around to saw my biggest fear cause I knew I would be tease if he know.

“ma’am can I use you phone a second?”, the little boy said from behind me and made me wonder, he is around six and at max seven.

“sure.”, I said unsurely and hand my phone, “do you get lost?”

“yes, my sister isn’t the one that you can hang out with so easily.”, he said and get my phone.

He is so cute and made me laugh, how a boy around his age can be this smart or just so good at speaking.

“no, no no, your battery died.”, he said worriedly and gave the phone back.

“oh sorry, I just forgot to charge it last night.”, I said and get my phone, I pressed and hold the power to made myself sure about that and that was true unfortunately.

“so should we find your sister? With each other?”, I asked and smiled at him a little widely.

“so we are going to be partner?”, he asked and wondered me again.

-kind of, I guess?

-so we have to know each other name, mine is Jisung, what’s yours.

“Yujin.”, I said with the softest smile I’ve ever done before, he us obviously my type, he is cute and so funny to talk to.

“as beautiful as your face.”, he said made me to hold my laugh, OMG he is really good at catching women’s heart, and I couldn’t help but laugh at how smart he is.

“your even better than my idiot fiancé at talking.”, I said an smiled, “should we walk hand to hand to find your sister?”

-do you have fiancé?

-shouldn’t I?

“I don’t mean that, sorry.”, he said and get my hand.
We walk few minute and looked where ever he said that he was there with her sis but we couldn’t find.
A black wear woman pass us in a rush.
“why is she running?”, he asked curiously and followed her way by his gaze.
“don’t know.”, I said and shrugged my shoulder at him.
“maybe she was a celebrity cause she was wearing mask.”, he said and we walked again.
Few minuet passed again, without any sign of her sister no where in the world we could find her. I wondered if someone looking for him or me too, cause my phone battery died and I couldn’t answered any phone.
“noona? You can go if you have work, I can’t handle it-”

“come on, we are partner, partner don’t leave each other alone.”, I smiled and he smiled back then suddenly yelled after looking around.

“Noon-na.”, he shouted and ran to his sister.

“Ji-Jisung! Where were you going.”, his sister yelled back and I walked to their place.

“I’m not going anywhere, you are the one who go.”, he said and then pointed at me, “this noona find me and help me to find you.”

“Oh thank you.”, she said and hugged my really tight,

“I didn’t know what to do if I didn’t find him.”

“I’m happy about you two find each other.”, I said and hugged her back.

“noona,”, Jisung said immediately and cut our little huge, “ isn’t he your idiot fiancé?”

I my heel to face youngest son of Mr. Oh who was looking at me with smiled and actually smirked.

“who is idiot the one who turned her phone off or me?”, he said and crossed his hand over his chest.

“Obviously you, and if you mean me by the one who turned her phone off, I didn’t my battery died.”, I said and rolled my eyes at him.

“so you are idiot that didn’t charge it last night.”, he said and grabbed my arm, I didn’t know why he did that but I didn’t protest, cause I felt safer when he did and he looked serious that meant something  was going on that made him a bit nerves.

“that’s why she called you an idiot.”, Jisung said suddenly and even me didn’t know what he was mean.

“what?”, Sehun asked with question mark above his head.

“you didn’t know how to treat beautiful lady like her.”, he said.

“What are you saying Jisung?”, her sister said worriedly, “oh sorry sir he didn’t mean it.”, her sister said and bowed again.

“thank you Jisung.”, I said with smiled and pressed his hand in mine again to show how thankful I am.

“he didn’t say brilliant thing that made you happy.”, he said and rolled his eyes but I bet he embarrassed.

“do you got jealous of me?”, Jisung asked and made me to bite my cheek from inside to didn’t laugh out loud.
“W-what? Why should I jealous if you?”, he said and shoot another glare at little boy.
“cause noona love me more than you, am I right Yujin noona?”, he asked me with smirk that was reminded me of Sehun’s.
“yes, of course.”, I said and looked at Sehun, who was looking at me with his serious face, “what?”, I said and acted like I didn’t know any thing.
“I’m really sorry of both of you.”, her sister said an bowed again, “we are going right now Jisung.”
His sister get his hand and pulled him on her way.
“goodbye noona!”, he said excitedly and shacked his hand.
“goodbye.”, I said smiled at him, even if I didn’t want his cute face and manner made me smile.
“so do you love him more?”, Sehun asked and grabbed my arm in order to made me face him.
“of course! Didn’t you know?”, I said and walk away to head a fish market but suddenly a train of thought cross my mind.
‘Why is he searching for me? Is it just because I didn’t answer my phone? I am adult do there is no reason to being worry about me even if I didn’t answer.’

“Sehun,”, I said, “is there something wrong?”, He looked at me but there was no way I would able to read him.

“yes, someone was following you and more than fifty present I’m sure that she was a woman from clinic.”, he said and looked at me. There is no change in his face, the fact that maybe I would be in danger didn’t change anything for him.
“there is nothing for you to be worried about I protect you.”, he said and walk near me.
That was the fact that made me sick, even if I don’t love him, I care about him not just to protect him, I care about his feeling, his emotion, I’m watching him every simple act of him.
“So what? I don’t need a body guard.”, I said and increased my speed I didn’t want to catch by him specially that moment, but obviously I couldn’t run from him wherever I go it didn’t matter.
“What’s wrong?”, he said and turned me by my shoulder, “I’m not your body guard to act like this to me.”, he said angrily and closer his face to mine, “I already got tired of you childish act, if you can’t understand me it’s no matter here.”, he took a deep breath and before I could even talk spook again, “I don’t give a if you don’t want to lesson, I made you listen to me if you don’t mind to do it willingly, got it?”
He was angry to death and I just knew the reason, my word. Was they that bad That made him this crazy?
“You don’t have any right to talk to me like this, I tried my best to deal with you all the time till here and just shouted my mouth and let you do whatever you want, you think it’s easy to deal with such a beast? And you now talking to me like I’m the one who doing it wrong, what did I do wrong?”
“you don’t even see my beast side now, do you want me to show you?”


Everything just went so wrong, even that we were sitting next to each other didn’t help.
By passing every second I felt more worse about the way I talked and acted and more my heart want to apologized, pounding so hard in my chest that I started to being worried if he hear it or not.
He was doing his for heaven’s sake work and I just sat next to him without even breathing on the bed.
I looked at him again, I thought that I looked at him in this thirty minute more than 6 time, then I opened my mouth and closed it again, no word could rescue both my heart and pride at the same time.
“sorry.”, I hoped he hear my voice that I hardly managed to sound it out and betray my pride.
He didn’t answered so I take it as he didn’t hear it.
I stood up from my seat and head toward the door cause I didn’t have pla to brook my promise to my future brother in law and I couldn’t bare the room atmosphere anymore.
“accepted.”, he said without moving his gaze from his laptop.
“I didn’t mean that-”
“it’s not important that what do you mean, the fact that you are safe is important.”, he said and didn’t bother himself to looked at me.
“it is exactly the thing that is bothering me, my feeling isn’t important, just my life.”, I said and tried my best to hold my tears, “not only you, all of the people that I know bothering themselves to made me a good life without considering my feeling.”
I hold my face down cause I didn’t want to Sehun saw my face when I was crying, it was so embarrassing.
I didn’t even get how he managed to come that close and even hugged me.
I couldn’t help but cry at that time cause, I just felt to cry when I find his embrace so safe, the way he hugged me, it was nice, his perfume smelt so sweet and his embrace was so cozy.
“don’t cry okay?”, I looked at him with amused eye, I just didn’t see a person I was a few hours ago in this man.
“why are you so unstable?”, I asked dumbly.
“cause you are unstable.”, he said with smirk but suddenly turned it to the soft smile, “I accepted to marry you and you know it’s already that it wasn’t because of I have feeling for you, but it don’t mean I just ignore your feeling or you, I won’t let you to get hurt in any way.”
“I’m not weak.”, I said and looked at him straight, I didn’t want to any one think that I’m weak.
“I know.”, he said and again his grin appear in his lips, “just in front of the sea animal.”
My eyes opened as wide as a tennis ball and my jaw dropped.
“h-how did you know?”, I asked in shock and disbelief cause nobody know it except my own family, let me guess, grandpa?
“my mother said you didn’t want to come in the fish market, she just guess that you scared but know I can say it’s true.”
-no it’s not I’m not scared.
-good, so we can go to buy fish on big fish place.
-W-what?
-my mother want to cancel it but if you don’t scared we will go there tomorrow.
I didn’t said any thing cause it didn’t matter what was my choice I would die.

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New chapter has been updated ❤sorry for late update again It was new year's holiday and I was too busy studing for the university exam and probebly going to be busy, Love U

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pjnn24
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I'm liking this~ Keep it up!!
Hanbyeul
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Hey, you mentioned wanting people to comment to help you improve I'm just going to give you a rewritten version of this foreword to for it
to make more sense; I can help you with the editing process of your story further on if you would like I'll also give you an explanation of my edits and changes:

Yujin is the only child that her father had. Her grandfather wants to give her everything, but there are some conditions.

1) Only a man can have ownership of her grandfather's company.

2) She has to work until she marries.

She hates both of these rules, but what can she do? He is her grandfather, her only family after her parents' passing.

The only thing she remembers from her childhood is that her grandfather said that he loves her; that he will protect her from everything even her parents. Yujin used to see her mother in her dreams, but that's all she can remember of her mother. After her grandfather said those words, she stopped appearing to her. Yujin can no longer remember much about her parents.

Yujin's aunt is the current owner of the company with her husband until Yujin is able to marry. Jinhyun, the son of Yujin's aunt, once confessed that he has feelings for Yujin, even loves her. Yujin turned him down due to them being family. The five of them live together.

Now I'll explain what I changed and why:

The grammar at places was all over the place and difficult to read; I did my best to make changes that make it simpler to read and easier to follow. The reason I changed the point of view is that it's just the foreword and it is just an introduction to the character. It's a little weird for her to say something like that to herself, isn't it? When you write in first person your audience is put into the shoes of the character so explaining things that way makes it awkward and hard to get a feel of. I hope this is helpful and I'm always willing to help! Welcome to AFF you mentioned this is your first time writing on here!