Beauty and The Best

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It's my first time writing and I just want to know how this site work so sorry for my bad work and my bad english grammer. Help me to improve plz and comment for me my mistake or if you enjoy story♥️

Yujin tried her best to be out of every thing that related to her family business, Min's company that going to be her company.

But after receiving a mysterious message Yujin tried to figure about the problem that involved all her company but at the time Oh Sehun enter her life and changed many thing that even she couldn't believe. And the curtain rises slowly to disclose all the secret.

 

Foreword

Yujin is the only child of his father, son of Mr. Min , who wants to give his granddaughter everything but there are some condition.

  1. Only a man can have ownership of her grandfather's company.

  2. She has to work there until she marries.

She hates both of these rulse. She hates company, but what can she do? Her grandfather is her only family, only one she can trust in this world after her parents' passing.

The only thing she remembers from her childhood is that her grandfather said that he loves her; that he will protect her from everything even her parents.

Yujin used to see her mother in her dreams that seems really alive to her, but that's all she can remember of her mother. After her grandfather said those words, she stopped appearing to her but Yunji missed her mother's dream. after that can no longer remember much about her parents.

Yujin's aunt is the current owner of the company with her husband until Yujin is able to marry. Jinhyun, her cousin, childhood friend and the only one she lean on, once confessed that he has feelings for Yujin, even loves her. Yujin turned him down due to them being like sister and brother.

This is her boring routine life go to company then university and come back home again and some day get out of house just with her grandfather to make him happy. Nobody tries to understand her feeling about her parents, about company, about marriage, or make her happy-except Jinhyun-but still she is tankfull about many thing and do her job without nagging.

Until this time that everything get out of her control just because the stupid promise given by her grandfather She force to marry a guy that she don't know anything about.


Yujin kept her gaze on Sehun's face.

'Should I said it?'

'Damn it.'

"I feel bad.", Sehun broke the silence and rolled his body on the couch to face her.

"About what?", Yujin ended up asking with doubt, "I feel bad too.", she said simply, finally moved her gaze from him.

"About you staring at me for the past five minute, what do you feel bad about?", he challenged causally with evil smirk.

"Do you have eyes at the back of your head? Like Voldemort or something?", Yujin said tried to smirk, but she wasn't sure anymore about her facial expression when it came to Sehun.

"I just know you are normal, and all the normal girls stare at the handsome guy like me.", it hurt deep inside, somewhere like where her heart was, was it hurt cause every girl looked at him or cause she was normal girl in his eyes? She wasn't sure which but it hurt surly.

'I'm stupid of course he didn't love me.', she said and tried to look cool, but it’s hard to keep your face cool when you feel pain.

"Didn't answer me yet.", he said and sat up on the couch to took a better look at her.

"What's your question?", she said with no idea, she totally forgot that Sehun was there

even though all her mind was with him.

'Did he asked something?'

"What do you feel bad about?", he said and looked at her innocently.

"About your brothers not being around, the house is so quiet, I miss them.", she lied, actually she missed them but not that much to want them around, she needed this privet space for her and him for a while.

"Am I wrong?", he asked but it more sounded like he was talking to himself.

"About what?", she couldn't stop herself from asking although she knew that he spoke to himself it always wonder her that what he is thinking about.

He shoot a glare at her that caused her to taken a back a little. But his smirk made her even more scared, something about it was different this time, it was bitter.

Suddenly he jumped from his couch and sat just near her and caused her to turn away from him but Sehun was faster to tight his grip around her wrist and pulled her closer, "yes, I was wrong.", he said and looked at her so deep , she felt it.

His gaze just go further and further and finally he saw her heart and all the time she felt it.

"What the hell Sehun? Why are you acting like Venom? You are scaring me-"

"I'm not scaring you; don't miss understand your heart, your heart beat increase because of another reason.", the corner of his lips move upward and his usual smirk appeared again.

"What were you wrong about?", she tried to ignore his smirk that made her nerves, trying to free her hand but it was imposable.

"You are not normal, hell no. You have something that other girl haven't and I confirm they will not have.", he said and come nearer. Now their face just have an inch distance, but she wasn't sure she could lesson anymore cause her heartbeat was in her ears and it felt like she was going to be deaf anytime.

"And w-what is it?", she tried not to crack but it was impossible when his gaze was fixed on her lips.

"My heart."

1485-L
New chapter has been updated ❤sorry for late update again It was new year's holiday and I was too busy studing for the university exam and probebly going to be busy, Love U

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pjnn24
#1
I'm liking this~ Keep it up!!
Hanbyeul
#2
Hey, you mentioned wanting people to comment to help you improve I'm just going to give you a rewritten version of this foreword to for it
to make more sense; I can help you with the editing process of your story further on if you would like I'll also give you an explanation of my edits and changes:

Yujin is the only child that her father had. Her grandfather wants to give her everything, but there are some conditions.

1) Only a man can have ownership of her grandfather's company.

2) She has to work until she marries.

She hates both of these rules, but what can she do? He is her grandfather, her only family after her parents' passing.

The only thing she remembers from her childhood is that her grandfather said that he loves her; that he will protect her from everything even her parents. Yujin used to see her mother in her dreams, but that's all she can remember of her mother. After her grandfather said those words, she stopped appearing to her. Yujin can no longer remember much about her parents.

Yujin's aunt is the current owner of the company with her husband until Yujin is able to marry. Jinhyun, the son of Yujin's aunt, once confessed that he has feelings for Yujin, even loves her. Yujin turned him down due to them being family. The five of them live together.

Now I'll explain what I changed and why:

The grammar at places was all over the place and difficult to read; I did my best to make changes that make it simpler to read and easier to follow. The reason I changed the point of view is that it's just the foreword and it is just an introduction to the character. It's a little weird for her to say something like that to herself, isn't it? When you write in first person your audience is put into the shoes of the character so explaining things that way makes it awkward and hard to get a feel of. I hope this is helpful and I'm always willing to help! Welcome to AFF you mentioned this is your first time writing on here!