Miss you

Beauty and The Best

We almost arrived when she woke up again and I wondered if she was still drunk.

“Yugyeom.”, was the first word she said and put her palm on her forehead, jolting on her place.

“answer her.”, Baekhyun smirked, “act like you’re Yugyeom and ask her questions.”

“Baekhyun she is drunk not stupid, she’ll understand that I’m not Yugyeom.”, I just want to smack him in the head but not when he drive a car that I was in it cause you coldn’t tell what’s he going to do next.

“Yugyeom is here honey, don’t worry.”, he said insted and tried his best not to giggle.

‘how dear he call her honey in front of me.’

“hey I’m still here.”, I shoot a warning glare at his direction.

“oh are you mad that I call her honey? Sorry for my bad I just call my best friend this way no need to worried.”, another giggle escaped his lips.

“I have a bad dream.”, it was her who spoke this time, still laying on the back seats.

“And what’s that?”, Baekhyun asked curiously as I was too to be honest so I decided to let him do.

“Sehun was in it-“

Baekhyun burst in laugh the time my name pass her lips.

“what’s wrong Yugi?”, she asked weakly but confused was shown in her voice.

“nothing continue.”, I said and made Baekhyun to stop laughing and looking at me instead with those interest eyes of him.

Hopfully she was drunk enough to didn't understand the voice changing.

“I don’t remember it but- oh did you banged my head somewhere? It’s hurt like hell.”, I look at her from passenger seat, her eyes was closed but her face was shown the pain she suffered.

“wake me when we arrived.”, she said her eyes still closed.

“we arrived.”, Baekhyun said in low voice to me hear it only.

“okay we arrived.”, I said louder to her and get out of the car to help her. 

It was dark outside the door and no light was in the street except her own home.

She get out of the car herself but obviously wasn't able to walk on her own so I grabbed her by her waist gently.

She suddnly lean all her body on me and huged me by my waist. Her face was buried on my body, a little lower then my chest and I was afraid that she start to cry again.

Her hug got tighter on my waist, “Yugi, I see him in my dream and I cry in front of him.”, she talked again and I didn’t know how to response so I let her continue.

“I miss him.”

‘what?’, I yelled inside my mind and looked at her hurtful expression, she wasn’t joking- she was just drunk I guess, so drunk.

“did it mean you love someone when you missed that someone?”


Y U J I N:

I opened my eyes but before I could looking around I closed it again from the intense of light that came through the window to my eyes all in a second.

The pain was all over my body like some horses walked on it and my head felt like someone play football with it just a second ago, it was ing heavy like finally I got some brain in it.

‘so if having brain feels like this, I’m happy with not having it.’, said to myself angrily as I tried again and moved my body from side to side to avoid the light coming to my eyes that burn the room like a ing sun itself.

I opened my eyes again but got my mistake a little later, even tough I knew my bed and recognized it couldn’t help myself not looking all over the room like a crazy as I used to be.

‘when this looking-round-syndrome will stop?’, asking myself I got up and sat on the bed.

My head was heavier than I expected so I put my hand on my head to didn’t lose my balance from its heaviness and closed my eyes again.

“it’s the simple and first effecting of the hangover and you have to suffer it cause you deserve it.”, I jumped as I heard the male voice but when I opened my eyes-which caused more pain in my head- I didn’t see him.

“am I going crazy? Why I hear his voice?”, I said to myself loudly, “how could he be here? Oh god I’m losing my mind.”

“no your not.”, another sound from him and I was just going to freaked out cause looking around he wasn’t here for the heaven’s sake.

“What do you mean I’m not here.”, his voice played in my ears again and suddenly someone sat on my bed right next yo me, “I’m just here, can’t you see me?”, he sounded a bit surprised and I couldn’t help it but higher my gazed to find him right next to me, he was there real live and wholesome.

‘he can’t be- OMG, I got it, it’s my imagination after hangover, now I’m seeing him even when he is not around, wonderful.’, it explaind his sudden appearance and his voice with out his appearance. “oh your just imagination, you’re not real.”, I finally share my thought with Sehun’s imagination. 

“fantastic, now am I look like an imagination to you?”, he sounded a bit hurt, “get up, we had to get rid of this hangover, I’m getting worried.”

“GOD you look so real, even your speaking tune is the same.”

“are you even listening?”

I looked at him again and move my hands in front of his face, not quite sure that I could touch or not, “are you get disappear when I touch?”, I again share my thought loudly.

“don’t know, wanna try?”, his famous smirk appear in his roses lips again and made me to scared a bit, his face didn't show any shame that I expected.

‘Can an imagination have a dirty thought too?’, I thought to myself and tried to keep a fair distance but suddenly he put his hand on my waist and pulled my closer to him.

“should we examination it?”, he said most likely to himself, “should we kiss and then we will be sure.”, his smirk even got wider and scarier but I just couldn’t react yet, my mind went completely blanked after hearing the kiss- no that unblessed word.

“you can’t be serious.”, I said trying to sound certain about my opinion but Sehun broke it down so easily, always, even his imagination made my heart to beat faster.

“why? Can’t I kiss my fiancé?”, he said and lowered his smooth, withe, artistic face to my level and look straight into my eyes, I couldn't help but looking I like it honestly looking into his face and enjoy the way God made it, “I’m going to come nearer until you tell me that I’m not an imagination to you.”

And he really did, OMG I could see every single details on his face, he was so near. I just thought I was going to be deaf because of the loud sound of my heart pounding in my ears.

‘HIS IMAGINATION IS GOING TO KISS ME, NO WAY. Unless it isn’t really an imagination.’, I just could yelled inside my mind cause the heart pounding was too loud and my ing new brain didn't respons at all.

Our lips was almost touched when I move back my head suddenly and sounded out surprisingly, “your not an imagination.”, looking at him again, his eyes now widen as mine, “an imagination can’t be this precise.”, ‘and beautiful, I added in my mind. ‘I just realized but could we continue and kiss?’, I asked inside my mind without knowing what am I talking about. ‘oh god what am I saying shut up Min Yujin, shut the entry of hell up.’ 

“that’s right.”, he said finally and moved back, “let’s go down stairs and have some hangover soup, shall we?”, he didn't seem okay with it, which made me wonder, gulity, feeling like idiot at the same time.

'Any other bad feeling want to come?'

I nodded with my head lightly still a little ashamed about what happened, although it’s totally his fault, coming to a girl room.

‘wait, what the hell he doing in my room in the first place?’, I asked myself and looked at him with suspicious.

“nothing, I just come at the moment you woke up.”, he answered and offered his hand for me to lean on.

“holy crap, can you read my mind? Or I’m saying it out loud?”, I asked and accepted his hand tried my best not to lose my balance and ended up in his hug, my cheeck was starting to heat up again.

'It's embarssing.', I thought.

“your thought are loud enough to hear, and don’t worry about throwing yourself in to my hug suddenly you already did it yesterday.”, he smirked and made me to blushed from shame evdn more.

He wrapped his hand around my waist, help me to go down stairs with him to the kitchen. He pick out a chair and help me to sat.

The soup was already there but Dahyun wasn’t in sight, “ it might get cold till now, let me warm it.”, he picked the bowl up and put it on the microwave. “do you want me to tell you about a thing you told me last night.”, he suggested and sat next to me.

“no.”, I snapped immediately after.

‘my face going to be burned already from the heat on my cheek, thank you I dln't need more.’

“you just keep calling your boyfriend, ‘Yugi, Yugi, Yugi help me, Yugi that, Yugi this.’”, he said in overly girly tone and I couldn’t help but narrowed my eyes at him.

“stop it.”

“Yugi don’t want to.”, he continued with his still girly voice, “you also told me that-“

“I beg you stop it Sehun.”, I screamed and put my hands on my ears but he grabbed my wrist and pulled my hand away from it.

‘I have to change my method.’

“stop being jealous Sehun, it’s not suit you.”, I played my last card.

“what?”, he was taken a back by my sudden attack and let go off my hand.

‘yes, Oh Sehun it’s my turn to beat you.’ 

“jealous of who?”, he tried to make it cool and I should said he was almost success.

“don’t know, maybe Yeogyum.”, I said, trying not to make any eye contact.

‘it’s not the time yet, you don’t know how I’m going to do it Oh freaking Se Hun.’ 

“and for what?”, he said with raised eyebrow, it really seem like I surprised him by that name like he is the best human being in the world and everyone is lower than him.

“many thing, his good looking-“

“next.”, he cut me and looked so confident by his word, "you use to look me each time I come near to you and you still talking about good looking in front of me?"

‘okay, he is good looking too any way I should attack with something else.’, I search my mind to find a new weapon.

“he is so sm-“

“smarmy.”, another smirk appeared in his  face as he finished my sentences with the way he liked.

“no.”

“smug?”, he said thoughtfully and looked at me like he didn’t know any thing not even the subject we talking but even the planet we live in.

“no, what’s wrong-“

“smashed?”, ignoring me he continued to guess his unpleasant ending for the sentence, “no sorry that was you.”

“do you let me-“

“smelly?”, he snapped and shown me another smirk.

“why are you listing you own character feature?”, I said with smug smirk that I really hope suited my face, “I’m talking about Yeogyum not you.”, finally I shut him up for a good few second.

“do you remember what did you tell me last night?”, he asked with stone expression suddenly and made me to scare a little.

‘what did I tell him that make him this angry? What the me, I’m not going to drink alcohol never ever again.’, I gulped my own swallow and tried to find a right word.

“don’t get it, I mean every thing I said was just a lie, I was drunk you know, it wasn’t real me, I was probably being stupid and that’s it, Every thing I said I didn’t mean it.”

“really?”, his expression suddenly changed that made me taken a back. I suppose his expression would change to satisfying one or at least happy one but it’s weird so weird that I didn’t expect. it was kind of sad expression.

‘what did I tell him?’

But before I got a chance to ask the  damn microwave rang and made him to stood up so fast and brought a bowl for me.

“thanks.”, I said unsure about how did I sound like, “Sehun, I have something to ask you.”

“what?”, his expression was back to the cold one that he always have when he didn’t smirk.

“I didn’t want you to get involved with anything that doesn’t related to you so-“

“what’s the point?”, still cold and bitter.

“where you did find me last time, I want the address.”, I said and a little bit annoyed.

“what? Are you crazy-“

‘cut it, I’m so annoyed right now I couldn’t listen to your advice you jerk.’

“that’s none of you business, if I am any way but they probably just moved out of the place, cause they know it’s not safe any more, I want to check and tell the police, but at least I had to have the address.”

“no.”, he said simply, “I explain why but not now trust me you shouldn’t tell the police any thing.”, he said took a step toward me.

“what, but why? The police could find them, and I have the right they steal something from my company.”

“did they know it was you who interfere their business?”, his expression didn’t give anything.

“probably no.”

“don’t let them know then, until you make sure that you are safe and know them well to guess their next step.”, his eyes wasn’t as harden as they were at the first.


It was weird, Sehun just want to be a bodygaurd again, and I couldn't understand.

“call me when your class is over.”, he said.

“why are you being nice all of a sudden? Am I going to die?”, I asked and raised my eyebrow at him.

“honestly?”

“yeah, honestly.”, I answered him immediately.

“I don’t know, I just want to be nice, not that I wasn’t nice, I want to be nicer.”, he said full of himself, “now get out before I change my decision.”

“oh, good bye nicy.”, I said and get out of his car.

“good bye wify.”, he answered with smirk and started the car again.

“hey, don’t call me that you bastard.”, I screamed as his car getting farther and find my way to main gate.


It was our last class but I was already too tired.

“Honestly I didn’t think you could even make it and get out of your bed.”, Rosé said and giggling, “I don’t believe Sehun hear all the curse you throw at him and still he carry you home, Oh my god he is so lovely.”

“Don’t fangirling over him.”

“Okay topical girlfriend.”, she smirked, “but you just didn’t see how angry he was when Yugyeom was about to go after you, he literally slap him in the face.”

“Oh my, say you’re kidding me?”, I said as both of us entered the class and we sat at the end of the class.

I just brought my phone out of my pocket and send an apology text:

Min Yujin: Oh Yugi I am sorry, I just hear it now and I want to dig a hole and bury myself in it.

And I just waited but to my wonder it didn’t get him long to answer

Yeogyum: oh please don’t say that, it’s okay, I understand how much he loves you.

‘Love me? Puff none sense.’, I shacked myself a little.

Min Yujin: he dose not.

Yeogyum: so why did he burst of anger?

Min Yujin: Yugi you have no idea how none sense your word is. I know him his not like that.

Yeogyum: okay then, maybe you are right, by the way I know rosé didn’t tell you but do you want to join us? We are going to lotte word cause it’s the last they of my discount coupon all on me?

‘How dare she didn’t tell me?

Min Yujin: kidding me? Hell yeah.

“I have a question Ms. Min.”, I jolt a little when prof Kim called my name.

“Yes sir.”, I put my phone down immediate after and looked him in the eyes ashamedly.

“Do you mind if I tell you stop texting and pay a little attention to my class.”, he said and raised his eyebrow at me.

‘When did the class start? Damn it.’, I shot an angry glare at my best friend how just seem to take his sweet time seeing me be scolded by my favorite teacher. 

“Sorry.”, I said guiltily and turned my phone down to tell him that I’m listening from now on.

“Good, I have high level of hope that you could pass the exam this time, so don’t let me down.”

‘Oh my GOD, never, you are the one and only Kim Namjoon.’, I fangirling inside my mind.

“Sorry.”

I put my phone on my back pack and paid my full attention to his class, cause he really is the best, if it were any other prof, they might get my phone and took it to the guidance office and record it to my document which they didn’t let go off easily, but it were Kim Namjoon and I was glad to hell.

The class went well as always at least before the end of the class, cause at the end prof Kim said that there would be a exam for the next session and it was a really important one for the mid term.

“So please don’t absent.”, he said and looked at my direction and exited after.

“Why the hell you didn’t tell me he come in?”, I asked her angrily.

“I didn’t want to interrupt your texting.”, she made a puppy eyes and stuck herself to my arm.

“Don’t gave me that, it’s not working, cause you didn’t tell me you are going to lotte word either.”

‘Oh my god, she is so cute, did she use to be this cute in the past?*slap* no you shouldn’t lose to her puppy eyes.*slap*’

“I have planed to surprise you.”, she said exactly like when Anna knocked on Elsa’s door.

‘Wait why am I being Elsa? She is the one who  do it wrong.’

"Okay, just this time if you let me to win in some games.”, I said and the smirk of glee just appeared in my face.

“I do that too young lady if you just tell your sweet boyfriend to not freaked out over me.”, Jimin said and walked toward us  with Yeogyum standing beside him.

"Let’s enjoy ourselves.”, Rosé yelled and push three of us out of the gate.

"I thought I was clear about not to turn you phone off, and I already tell you to text me when your class is over.”, my ears caught his voice and made me turn to face him.

“hello to you too.”, he wasn’t alone Do Kyungsoo- D.O.- was standing behind him, and there was a huge smirk in his heart shape lips.

“why do you turn it off?”, he said and they walk toward us. Sehun’s face was completely poker, didn’t show anything at all.

“I was in  the middle of the class, and prof said me to do.”, I shrugged, it wasn’t technically my fault so I didn’t feel guilty at all.

“yesterday, there was no time for introducing.”, Yugyeom said polity and hold his hand to him, “my name is Yugyeom, Kim Yugyeom.”, Sehun just looked him in the eyes, and something was flashed in his eyes that was unknown to me, but I just hope he didn’t kill Yugyeom right there.

But suddenly D.O reached for his hand, grabbed and shacked it, “oh nice to meet you. My name is Do Kyungsoo and he is Oh Sehun.”

“I’m glade to see you.”, a small bitter smile actually a smirk appeared in his face.

‘GOD thank you that his brothers know what manner is at least.’, I yelled inside of my mind and let out sigh of relief.

“my name is Jimin.”, Jimin said simply without offering his hand, he felt the strange, atmosphere too.

“where were you going by the way?”, D.O. asked finally and looked at Yugyeom’s direction.

“ah we were going to lotte world, do you want to join?”, he asked with his breezy voice.

“actually we have –“

“we come.”, Sehun cut his brother off , glaring at me, he glanced at his brother.

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New chapter has been updated ❤sorry for late update again It was new year's holiday and I was too busy studing for the university exam and probebly going to be busy, Love U

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I'm liking this~ Keep it up!!
Hanbyeul
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Hey, you mentioned wanting people to comment to help you improve I'm just going to give you a rewritten version of this foreword to for it
to make more sense; I can help you with the editing process of your story further on if you would like I'll also give you an explanation of my edits and changes:

Yujin is the only child that her father had. Her grandfather wants to give her everything, but there are some conditions.

1) Only a man can have ownership of her grandfather's company.

2) She has to work until she marries.

She hates both of these rules, but what can she do? He is her grandfather, her only family after her parents' passing.

The only thing she remembers from her childhood is that her grandfather said that he loves her; that he will protect her from everything even her parents. Yujin used to see her mother in her dreams, but that's all she can remember of her mother. After her grandfather said those words, she stopped appearing to her. Yujin can no longer remember much about her parents.

Yujin's aunt is the current owner of the company with her husband until Yujin is able to marry. Jinhyun, the son of Yujin's aunt, once confessed that he has feelings for Yujin, even loves her. Yujin turned him down due to them being family. The five of them live together.

Now I'll explain what I changed and why:

The grammar at places was all over the place and difficult to read; I did my best to make changes that make it simpler to read and easier to follow. The reason I changed the point of view is that it's just the foreword and it is just an introduction to the character. It's a little weird for her to say something like that to herself, isn't it? When you write in first person your audience is put into the shoes of the character so explaining things that way makes it awkward and hard to get a feel of. I hope this is helpful and I'm always willing to help! Welcome to AFF you mentioned this is your first time writing on here!