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The Quiet World by Jeffrey McDaniel

In an effort to get people to look
into each other's eyes more, 
and also to appease the mutes, 

 

the government has decided
to allot each person exactly one hundred
and sixty-seven words, per day.

When the phone rings, I put it to my ear
without saying hello. In the restaurant
I point at chicken noodle soup.
I am adjusting well to the new way.

Late at night, I call my long distance lover, 
proudly say I only used fifty-nine today.
I saved the rest for you.

When she doesn't respond, 
I know she's used up all her words, 
so I slowly whisper I love you
thirty-two and a third times.
After that, we just sit on the line
and listen to each other breathe.

AN: this is so cute and lovely, isn't it? :)

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imageekx #1
Chapter 158: tHANK YOU for the inspiration i swear im itching to write something but i have zero idea
informantxgirl
#2
Chapter 84: omg, the australian one! haha
informantxgirl
#3
Chapter 26: ugh, i wish i could have some inspiration. writer's block is a pain.
informantxgirl
#4
Chapter 159: some of these can totally be titles
jeonnamjoo
#5
make more challenge. i like it^^
lakeofwisdom
#6
Chapter 152: Maybe will write with one of these prompts!
iamout #7
Chapter 3: you broke the streak for my writer's block. ohmygod. thanks for this!
Laymontae
#8
Chapter 149: god bless your soul for making this writing prompt thread <3
DGNA_Forever
#9
Chapter 147: LOL!!! This one it TOO funny!! I love it<3.