The date

Twin Exchange

 

Chapter 15: The date.

 

Kwangmin went home and saw Youngmin was getting ready for going out. He was wearing this outfit.

-      Where are you going? –Kwangmin asked him.

-      I’m going on a date with Gyuwon. –He said grinning.

-      Really?

-      Yeah, I will ask her to be my girlfriend.

-      So… will you tell her the truth?... you know about that you’re Youngmin and not Kwangmin.

-      Mmmm… I don’t think so. Do you think she will accept if I tell her the truth? –He said pouting.

-      Hyung, I think you should tell her the truth no matter what.

-      You don’t understand it Kwangmin, Gyuwon would never forgive me if I told her the truth.

-      How do you know it? Anyway, do you plan to stay like this forever? She will know it anyway.

-      Yeah, but not now. –Youngmin said standing up and leaving.

He headed to Gyuwon’s house and pressed the ring. Gyuwon opened the door smiling.

-      Hi! Kwangmin-ah.

-      U—uuh hi-ii –Youngmin said stuttering. “Wow! She looks so beautiful”

-      You look so beautiful. –Youngmin said still amazed.

-      I think I dressed too formal. –Gyuwon said blushed.

-      No, it’s okay. Let’s go. –Youngmin said extending his hand. Gyuwon took his hand and they got in the car. This time he brought Kwangmin’s car.

 

-      So, where are we going? –Gyuwon asked anxious.

-      It’s a surprise just wait. –Youngmin said smiling.

Youngmin parked the car and opened the passenger’s door. Gyuwon held his hand.

“Seriously, I have no idea of where we are going” Gyuwon thought.

-      I will cover your eyes and guide you. Please trust in me. –Youngmin said smiling; Gyuwon nodded and he covered her eyes.

They arrived to the beach. Youngmin had prepared a romantic dinner in front of the sea. Gyuwon opened her eyes and her jaw dropped.

-      I prepared this for you. Do you like it? –He said smiling sweetly.

-      This is amazing. I don’t even have words.

They sat down and the waiter came with the food. Youngmin was staring at Gyuwon while she was eating. Gyuwon realized about that and felt uncomfortable.

-      Yah! Why are you looking at me? Is there something on my face?

-      Yes, there’s something all over your face. –He said teasingly.

-      Mwo? You’re really weird. Everything was perfect until you opened your mouth.

-      Yah! I was going to tell you a compliment but you continue arguing with me. –He said upset.

-      Just shut up and eat Youngmin! – “OMG! I called him Youngmin! Babo! Babo! Babo!” Gyuwon thought and she covered with her hand.

-      Yeah! That’s what I should do! –Youngmin said mad and started eating.

“He didn’t realize about it” She thought. Youngmin was holding his tears of anger, he wanted this date to be perfect but they always end arguing. Gyuwon felt guilty about it.

-      I’m sorry Kwangmin. I didn’t mean that. It’s my fault. Please forgive me. –She said taking his hand. Youngmin lifted his head and smiled slightly.

-      No, it’s also my fault. Let’s forget this. Okay?

-      Okay. –She said smiling. –Let me feed you. –She fed him some meat.

-      I also want one of those. –Youngmin said point to the shrimp.

-      Okay. Say aahhh

-      Aaahhh.

-      Delicious right? –She said smiling. Youngmin nodded.

They finished eating and took a walk on the beach holding hands and then they sat on the sand.

-      I had some much time without coming to the beach is really beautiful. –Gyuwon said looking at the sea.

-      Yeah… -Youngmin placed her hair behind her ear. –But you’re more beautiful. –He whispered in her ear. Gyuwon blushed.

-      Noona… I love you. I really do, and I want to be with you all my life. So, officially… will you be my girlfriend? – He asked giving her a pink rose.

-      I think you already know the answer. –She said looking in his big brown eyes she loved.

-      Well, Noona, honestly, you’re the most unpredictable person I’ve ever known. –He said smiling trying to hide he was blushing.

-      Okay, then… yes, of course I will be your girlfriend.

Youngmin put his arm around her waist and leaned to give her a sweet kiss. She put her arms round his neck and they deepened the kiss. They looked at each other in the eyes and Gyuwon smiled shyly.

-      Gyuwon… -Youngmin said still holding on her.

-      Neh?

-      Do you love me? – He asked shyly.

-      Yes, I love you. –She said smiling and ruffled his hair.

-      Yah! Don’t do that.

-      I’m sorry, but it’s funny.

-      No, it’s not. But… if you want to have fun… -He looked at her and started tickling her.

-      Ha ha ha ha! Stop please!

-      I will only stop if you give me a kiss.

-      No! –She shouted but Youngmin continued tickling her. –Okay, okay. I’ll give you a kiss but please stop.

Gyuwon gave him a peck on the cheek.

-      Yah! I wanted a kiss here! –He said pouting and pointing to his lips.

-      I’m sorry but you just told me to kiss you, you didn’t say where. –She said chuckling.

-      You’re a cheater. Give me a kiss here. –He pointed to his lips again.

-      Nope! –She stuck out her tongue and started running.

Youngmin followed her running, until he caught her up and gave her a back hug.

-      I got you! –He said panting.

-      I let you win Babo! –Gyuwon said looking at the sea and entwined her fingers with Youngmin’s hands that were around her waist.

They stayed there for a couple minutes watching the sea and Youngmin pecked her head a couple times.

“Youngmin please take care of my heart, because I’m giving it all to you. Please keep your promise” Gyuwon thought.

“I can’t believe I’m with Gyuwon, with her I feel so protected. I love her so much. I hope this could last forever” Youngmin thought.

 

 

Youngmin took Gyuwon to her house and he went home. He couldn’t stop smiling and couldn’t wait to see Gyuwon again.

“I can’t believe what is happening. I’m finally with her. I must be dreaming” He thought grinning.

 

Happy Valentine’s Day!

 

Yeah, I know maybe it’s too late… but I wanted to say it.

What do you think about this chapter?

I have been thinking in rewrite my story.

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Sometimes I think it is.

Please tell me if you think is boring and I will try my best to make it more interesting.

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annoyme521
#1
So I actually read this fanfic years 2 years ago. It was the first fanfic i've ever read. I realized that i wasn't on AFF at the time and i was going through my subscriptions to try and clear some old ones that I didn't want anymore and i never got to comment on this story and tell you how amazing this was! So here it goes:

Author-nim, I sincerely thank you for this! I loved every second of it and I feel so happy being able to go back and read it with fond memories :)
The way you wrote the story was so beautiful and it really deserves more attention.
The way you made the characters was so believable I totally forgot that this wasn't an actual story haha.
But sincerely thank you and you did an awesome job with this story!
alejojaz000
#2
Chapter 36: Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good story.
bookangel2603 #3
Chapter 36: omggg im literally crying my eyes out right now !!!T.T the ending is sooo touching !!! i love ur story soo much you are such a good writer XD
zyrazain #4
Chapter 36: Sooo lovely... I love the whole story and the way you wrote it. Thank you authornim... you are good writer and keep continue writing... coz you have your fans to read your stories. Thank you for writing this lovely story and I love it till the end of chapter. It just like a drama in my head.
zyrazain #5
Chapter 24: I wish someone would confess like that to me... haha I'm dreaming again... awwww it's just so sweet the confession...
zyrazain #6
Chapter 23: Whoahh! This chapter just like private investigation series ^^
zyrazain #7
Chapter 22: Youngmin's letter makes me cry :'(
zyrazain #8
Chapter 20: Yes it's sad... huhu already cry...
zyrazain #9
Chapter 19: You made me cry for the last part... oh the drama started already...