Embrace the Thumbnail Moon

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Embrace the Thumbnail Moon

By: miechan

Reviewer: Imyeonieyeonie

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

1. Title - 8/10 -

Your title is very appropriate to the story line & genre to be very honest, it’s also quite intriguing but I gave it an eight because it didn’t caught my attention that much.
 

2. Description/Forward - 7/10 -

Your description is quite lacking and it wasn’t that much intriguing for us to be like “Oh … It looks like a nice plot.” However, your foreword was nice since you gave some chapter previews which makes the readers get interested on knowing more.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -

The character development was all good in general. But I really love how you developed You