He Heard it

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He Heard it

By: Queesnsabelle

Reviewer: Imyeoniyeoni

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1. Title - 7/10 -

Your title was actually good since reading it already gives us quite the idea of what the story is and a lot related to your story. But the thing is, it’s quite common for a title and it doesn’t catch quite the attention of people for them to check it out, it doesn’t give us that curiosity.
 

2. Description/Forward - 8/10 -

The foreword was nicely made and your format was so clean, nothing distracts me at all. It was nice how you place dialogues for each of the main character but you should’ve at least put a preview of the story like small conversations.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 9/10 -

Well, there’s no much development with Jungkook