requiem for a prayer

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requiem for a prayer

By: g--boy

Reviewer:comebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 10/10 -

I'm glad this a considerably one of a kind title. It fits your story flawlessly.
 

2. Description/Forward - 9/10 -

Though short, it held a great deal of suspense, hence, by extension, readers are nudged to read your story. 
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -

Youngbae had a prestigious background whereas Jiyong has a complicated one. it was simple- too simple as a matter of fact. I was hoping to be able to dig further into their background, social cliches and daily life, not just 'the time they though about each other'. Putting effort in creating a character would do you good