[RV] Young & Wasted

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Young & Wasted

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Young & wasted

 

By: Chariseuma

Reviewer: Krytoria

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

1. Title - 9/10 -

 

The title is great, it really match the theme of the story since the story is about drug and alcohol

 

 

2. Description/Forward - 9/10 -

The description of the story is just warning for the readers, but it great since some people might not like to read this kind of story or it not suitable for the young readers. I like the way you did the foreword, where you have a little preview of the story for the readers to read. You also have a small author note for your r

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I am thinking of reopening this soon. I need new people to hire tho... anyone intrested?

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