sand in the hourglass

review pick - up

sand in the hourglass

By: E-X-O-El

Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 6/10 -

Frankly speaking, I was drawn in by the title but was later utterly confused : the title doesn't really has direct linkage towards the plot. 
 

2. Description/Forward - 8/10 -

Overall, it was good, however the lack of suspense degraded it. Your sense of suspense wasn't enough to make readers DEFINATELY want to read this piece.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 5/10 -

I find Chanyeol's character hypocritical. A PLAYBOY does not stop playing around just because his best frien