Don't Touch My Hand And Call It Love

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Don't Touch My Hand And Call It Love

By: legilimens

Reviewer: Krytoria

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1. Title - 6/10 -

The title is quite weird for the story, it doesn't drawn the reader's attention what so ever. If someone were to take a glance at the story, they would just scroll by because the title doesn't seem so interesting. You should make some adjustment to the title.
 

2. Description/Forward - 7/10 -

There was really no description or foreword. The quote is nice but really it just there and does nothing to help open up the story to the readers. The picture of the two character is good. The foreword have nothing in it that would help hook the readers into reading the story, but it's good that you put a warning for the language and explicit scene
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 5/10 -

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