i'm not the only one

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i'm not the only one

By: karmachameleon

Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 10/10 -

The title was infinitely related to its content, it fitted your story perfectly. Nevertheless, readers are able to have a vague idea on the upcoming chapter they are yet to view.

2. Description/Forward - 5/10 -

I find the description in a poor state of condition. Not an ounce of suspense has been amplified, it could’ve been much better. One simple statement ain’t gonna make readers cringe onto your story- regarding the interesting plot, the description was subtlety short and wasn’t able to showcase the highlight of your story.

3. Character Development/ Showcasting - 8/10 -                                                                                                                                        Baekhyun- the main protagonist, was delicately presented: his personality, delicacy, dreams and regular basis- they were all well mentioned. However, this character lacks of background. For instance, the reason he was obsessed with music, his muse, his family? What was his confrontation speech? Otherwise that was Jinhee, she existed to benefit Baekhyun. Jinhee’s thoughts were not voiced out, neither was he