The choice

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The Choice

By: iheartcookie

Reviewer: xXxmani923xXx

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1. Title - 9.5/10

Your poster is very neat looking and it does catches the readers attention. I do like the font you used too. 

2. Description/Forward - 10/10

Your description and foreward aren't too detailed; in fact, it's detailed enough to lure your readers in. Also, it was nice seeing credits to the shops and other reviews you had requested for previously, including our shop!

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10

I don't really see any major character development in the beginning of your story but your characters do go through conflict a lot so your characters are gradually developing, even if it is a little. Your characters' personality traits are described pretty well and there were times I got confused about a certain character but after reading on, the confusion did eventually