the perfect imperfections

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the perfect imperfections

By: jessie101

Reviewer: xXxmani923xXx

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

1. Title - 10/10 -

The title fits well with the story/plot and the title doesn't give the story away.
 

2. Description/Forward - 9/10 -

Your trailer was very interesting to watch! The trailer portrayed the events from your story perfectly in your foreward. However, your description/foreward was very long- which is too detailed for your readers and might give away a lot of your story. 
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 10/10 -

There is a significant amount of character development in your story. Within the first few chapters you easily learn about Alice's background along with some other characters like Haru and Kris. At first, Kris seemed like the typical cold-hearted rude jerk but he starts warming up to her a little, though he didn't want to admit it. I felt that the sce