You Are What You Eat

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You Are What You Eat

By: BaekYeolChanBaek

Reviewer: ComebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 10/10 -

‘You Are What You Eat’ is definitely a unique and protruding title, readers are nudge towards perusal of the fic. It is undeniably an ambiguous idea to apply a daily life idiom with direct linkage to the plot. Nevertheless, just as ambiguously, readers might mistake it for a fluff-filled story instead.
 

2. Description/Forward - 8/10 -

It is, overall and frankly speaking, not bad- grammar, vocabulary, selective choice of plot (the two boy’s account of each other). However, the last paragraph was greeted with grammatical errors and that mistake inched the proem downwards. Do also take note that the sense of suspense was divested in your description, the tension wasn’t enough to rouse readers.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 6/10 -

Donghae is fine, he has a prom