A christmas escapade

review pick - up

A christmas escapade

By: ChuntsunBaes

Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 10/10 -                                                                                                                                                                                                        I was caught up by the title at first glance, it is unique in a sense that it is considerably a "one of a kind" title. The fact that your title has direct linkage to the plot allows readers  to generally foreview the plot. nevertheless, it was a 10/10 perfect title for the story.

2. Description/Forward - 7/10 -                                                                                                                                                                Overall, it was good, but the lack of suspense degraded it, it wasn't good enough to nudge readers into definately wanting to view this piece.